Reviews for Proof of Heaven
Bloody Pumpkinhead chapter 11 . 8/12/2010
Pam is on the roll! Hooray! Three chapters of this story and two chapters of Passing Time within a month! 8D Thank you so much for all these awesome updates.

Somehow it's hard to imagine Johanna in a pink frock. I don't know. Blue suits her much better IMHO. Anyway. I love how you've made Anthony, Johanna and Toby to be so utterly adorable. Seriously, I'm positive that I have X3 expression on my face every time I'm reading a cute scene of them. And I also love how Johanna and Nellie can talk seriously and maturely of things and the next moment they're having a dandelion fight or something. Haha.

YESH. Sweeney does the typical "Oh my gosh I'm attracted to another woman, I must avoid her at any costs" thing, but he doesn't know that the more he tries to deny his feelings, the stronger they get. MWAHAHAHAHAA! I know that I should probably feel sorry for Lucy, but I can't. I have a cold black heart which sides with Sweenett.

...And speaking of Sweenett, HOLY UPELKUCHEN. They kissed. They kissed! TRALALA I'M SO HAPPY! *futterwacks vigorously*
Lost in Day Dreams chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
*singing* Have I told you lately...that I love you? *stops singing* Cuz seriously, I do. Lol! Sorry, I'm a bit hyper but you only have yourself to blame for writing such an exciting chapter, especially with that kiss at the end. I could practically hear the Hallelujah chorus ring out when it happened. Lol. And although I may have to do so anyway, I totally can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter to see how they handle each other's company after this huge leap forward in their relationship. Twenty bucks says it'll be REALLY awkward. Lol! Well anyway, to sum up my rant: fantastic job and I can't wait to see more! :D
libramoon-scorpiovenus chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
Is speechlessly happy an okay review? cause i cant think of any thing else to say that would accomodate my wonderful feelings on this chapter!

love,

shadow 3
libramoon-scorpiovenus chapter 10 . 8/10/2010
You honestly have ZERO idea how much i missed this storyyy! I kept waiting and I knew it would be great when it got here, but I was still anxious. But let me tell you, it was so worth the wait(: i absolutely lovett and i am about to go and read the next chapter right now(:! keep it up pleaseee!

-shadow
Gallows Calibrator chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
FINALLY, THEY KISSED! 8DD

Anyway, awesome chapter as always.

...Oh dear. Busy for a bit? D: Well. I wish you a happy vacation and I'll be waiting for that day to arrive... when you update.

...Just ignore my Offspring reference. I try to incorporate them into everything. :P
mischieflover chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
nice update! i'm glad that johanna seemed to be completely unaware of the adults' tension. she would have been all upset on her birthday. and, THEY KISSED! HECK YES! now sweeney will realize that he needs elenor and not lucy anymore!

if you can't squeeze in another chapter before life takes over, good luck with your classes and have fun on vacation! this was a fantastic chapter :)

~ml
Inkfire chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
This was really, really great!
Stargatecrazy chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
SQUEE! Finally some actual romance *dies*

That was so sweet and awesome and...*dies again*

I seriously can't wait to see what happens next! :)

SGC
linalove chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
Ah!What a wonderful kiss!Loved it!

More soon please?

xxx Lina :)
JustMe-Liz chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
*Faints*

I love you.

There's nothing left to say. You're my hero.
Ratty Darling chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
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SO INTENSE!

Lovely job and amazing writing.

Bravo!
docomo chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
I'm so impressed at how you can write such delicious lengthy chapters in such a short time. I'm so happy that they finally kissed! Update wherever you can, I'll be waiting
Lovinett chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
I just gasped out loud. It was only a matter of time before he realized Mrs. Lovett has always loved him. :')

Such good writing. You capture atmospheres perfectly. *applause*
Lamia of the Dark chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
So it only took you 11 chapters to finally get something started between the two of them... and now you're not going to update for a long time, lol. :D
Spunkalovely chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
YES! YES! WHOOOO! *gets up and dances like a crazy person* THEY KISSED! Although, you know this. I was literally on the edge of my seat. I LOVE it. :D
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