Reviews for Proof of Heaven
Gallows Calibrator chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
FINALLY, THEY KISSED! 8DD

Anyway, awesome chapter as always.

...Oh dear. Busy for a bit? D: Well. I wish you a happy vacation and I'll be waiting for that day to arrive... when you update.

...Just ignore my Offspring reference. I try to incorporate them into everything. :P
mischieflover chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
nice update! i'm glad that johanna seemed to be completely unaware of the adults' tension. she would have been all upset on her birthday. and, THEY KISSED! HECK YES! now sweeney will realize that he needs elenor and not lucy anymore!

if you can't squeeze in another chapter before life takes over, good luck with your classes and have fun on vacation! this was a fantastic chapter :)

~ml
Inkfire chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
This was really, really great!
Stargatecrazy chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
SQUEE! Finally some actual romance *dies*

That was so sweet and awesome and...*dies again*

I seriously can't wait to see what happens next! :)

SGC
linalove chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
Ah!What a wonderful kiss!Loved it!

More soon please?

xxx Lina :)
JustMe-Liz chapter 11 . 8/10/2010
*Faints*

I love you.

There's nothing left to say. You're my hero.
Ratty Darling chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
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SO INTENSE!

Lovely job and amazing writing.

Bravo!
docomo chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
I'm so impressed at how you can write such delicious lengthy chapters in such a short time. I'm so happy that they finally kissed! Update wherever you can, I'll be waiting
Lovinett chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
I just gasped out loud. It was only a matter of time before he realized Mrs. Lovett has always loved him. :')

Such good writing. You capture atmospheres perfectly. *applause*
Lamia of the Dark chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
So it only took you 11 chapters to finally get something started between the two of them... and now you're not going to update for a long time, lol. :D
Spunkalovely chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
YES! YES! WHOOOO! *gets up and dances like a crazy person* THEY KISSED! Although, you know this. I was literally on the edge of my seat. I LOVE it. :D
JDLuvaSQEE chapter 11 . 8/9/2010
YAYYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAY!
Spunkalovely chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
Ahh, and the truth comes out. (: I love the ending. :D
Bloody Pumpkinhead chapter 10 . 8/2/2010
Ahh, fast update. Me likey. Hehehe.

You know, I've never cared much of AnthonyJohanna (or teen romances in general), but... AWW. AWW. AWW. They're so adorable.

X'D Nellie's Lucy impression is too hilarious for words.

Haha, I love how different Lucy and Nellie are. And I love how you write arguments. -nodnod-

Uwaah, I AM getting sleepy. *bangs her head against the desk repeatedly - stay awake, stay awake, stay awake... must... finish... reviewing...*

ROFL, Nellie's "Eek, a rat!" moment. By the way, Toby is so adorable.

...and then the rest of the chapter... wow. Just wow. Sweeney actually realized that his wife isn't as perfect and divine he always thought she was. Their relationship is seriously on the verge of death. And he feels nothing when she touches him... (but when a certain redhead touches him, his skin is tingling... I shouldn't be so happy about it, but I can't help it. mwahaha...)

Ahh. I want to read more. More, I say!
Bloody Pumpkinhead chapter 9 . 8/2/2010
*crawls out of nowhere hands behind her back, head hanging low* Do forgive me for not reviewing sooner. Please accept seven gallons of virtual Ben & Jerry's ice cream as an apology. *showers you with ice cream pints*

I'm sorry if I'm not rambling forever as I usually do, because I want to get as many reviews written as possible before I start to feel sleepy.

I was surprised that Nellie hadn't told Jo that it was His Judgeness who had sent Benjamin Barker away as she usually tells her everything.

Ah, I always love Todd and Nellie's late night drinking&chatting moments. They seem to bring them a little closer to each other every time ;D

Hehe, it's funny how Nellie thinks that Lucy's loyalty to Benjamin is nearly unmatched as her own devotion to Todd is totally incomparable. I mean, she didn't mind at all that he slaughtered Pirelli and even helped him to get rid of the body... If someone's crazily loyal, she is. Haha.

The flashback is amazing. I've said this before, but your portrayal of Nellie is thoroughly wonderful. How she is pissed off about the fact that Lucy is such a twit, but still she goes to save her from "the den of depravity". I laughed out loud when she kicked Turpin (he surely deserved it) and told him what she'll do if he doesn't stay away from Lucy. She is amazing. XD

I loved the image of Todd watching sleeping Nellie across the table. (Actually, I was thinking of drawing it, but Sandy was faster. Haha.)

And omg, Nellie speaking to Lucy the words she said in the movie to Todd (before Anthony came and ruined the moment)... Brilliant. I could imagine it was anything but easy for her to say that. And Omgosh, what Lucy said about the way Todd looks at Nellie... O_o Is she giving up on him?

Anyways, great chapter. I'm so happy that you hadn't forgotten this story, because I love it. (Maybe I should thank Robynne, too, for being a freaking chapter Nazi XD)
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