Reviews for Proof of Heaven
AwkwardOrchid chapter 13 . 5/24/2012
This story is so good! I really hope you finish it. It just got to the good part. :) xx
AwkwardOrchid chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Great story. I love how you've written Mrs Lovett.. especially talking about the weather. That was really cute! xx
mychakk chapter 13 . 5/16/2012
Hello

I just wanted to tell you that this is a story with THE plotline I was just dying to read. I hardly ever read unfinished stories, but I could not stay away from this. I want so badly to read a story with Sweeney Todd returing to his 'awating' wife (and others) only to realize nothing will beever as ut used to be. And this story is perfect. I also find myself enjoying the Johanna/Anthony parts too (never cared for those).

I really LOVE your characterization of Johanna (that she's not just a Lucy clone, but has a personality of her own. That her eyes are her Father's, that she share's personality traits - the woman's who has raised her.

I actually like (in my general dislike for her character) your Lucy. I've always pictured her as weak-willed, naive wiff of a girl. But I can buy her selfishness (even if it gritts on my nerves) 'cause she's this kind of girl that got everything she ever wanted simply because of her angelic looks. She nagers me with her demanding nad bossy nature and her diability to emphasize with anyone. She onlt sees her tragedy not noticing the suffering of others. Thit is exactly the Lucy I thought she'd be if she hadn't gone bonkers.

But most of all I love Sweenett of this story. How it was clear that Nellie is the one for Sweeney. Oh she might have not exactly be the one for Benjamin but she's THE one for .

There is only one tiny not-exactly-complain. As much as I adore and as much as I like your portrayal of her, she tends to be a bit of Mary-Sue-ish... Well not that much in this story. Altough she IS always there to help, slove, selflessly step-down and all... But she's here more ...human, more realistic, than she was in the Shadows Proves the Sunshine (she was VERY Mary-Sue-ish there... the unbreakable hero who stirs trouble and takes all the punishment... please don't get me wrong, I did adore that story as well.) Just thought I'll point out this little bit. For future references.

I hope to see an update sometime soon. :)

Wish you the best!
InsanityRunsInMyBlood chapter 13 . 4/14/2012
My goodness! I absolutely adore this fic! You HAVE to continue writing, please! The romance is developing, and I can smell it in the air! XD
Abbi chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
Hey! I love your story's so much but especially this one! You've left this at such a cliffhanger its unbearable! Please please please update soon before I go crazy? It would make my life. Xxx
Emita chapter 13 . 4/1/2012
Hello!

It has been SO LONG since I have read any fan fiction at all, but I stumbled upon this and I have spent the past hour and a half DEVOURING it. It's brilliant. I absolutely love how you're playing the Lucy/Lovett/Todd dynamic. It's very organic. I also love how you intertwine things from the original, from the pivotal (Pirelli, Turpin) to the small details (quotes, Mrs. Lovett's reference of daisies, et cetera).

Beautiful work. I cannot say enough good about it!
Laura Lestrange chapter 13 . 3/30/2012
please please please! update! PLEAASE D:
RubyRosette5 chapter 13 . 3/29/2012
please update !

I lovett !
Mystique84 chapter 13 . 3/29/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! totally amazing, and finally they kiss and Anthony is taken and so much is happening and you leave it for 2 months! come on missy! get back to writing!
Abbey chapter 13 . 3/26/2012
I love this story so much it's amazing! Please update soon the suspense is killing me!
kupkakeky chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
GAH! One of the worst places you could stop your story! I read one of your other stories and it got me hooked! I decided I needed something else to read, so I read this and I'm hooked on it too! I've noticed that you haven't updated in a few months. Please update soon. :)
mauratalityrate chapter 13 . 3/9/2012
I just had a tantrum when I finished this and realises there wasn't another chapter.

#NoRegrets :L

But srsly. This is AMAZING! You're bloody talented! I literally love this soooo much. XD

If you don't continue I may never recover from the heartbreak. So.

GAHHH. This is why I should always set the filter to completed fics! I get all absorbed and attached and then there isn't an ending and I almost die.

Ahem.

Sorry for rambling. But basically, this is teh awesomesauce, and if you don't continue may your entire family be cursed for the next seven generations. O_o
Bloody Pumpkinhead chapter 13 . 3/4/2012
I swear that I was going to review sooner, but I had my mind on school stuff and I'd completely forgot about it until today when I found some of my old Sweeney drawings and was like "Hey, I drew this for Pam. . . . . . . . . OH CRAP" :'D

As always, I love the conversations between Nellie and Johanna. They're so hilarious together! The whole talk about Shakespeare made me giggle more than once.

"And what about 'To be or not to be, that is the question!' Make up your bloody mind!"

You know, I myself have wondered about that sometimes. XD

When I read "Two hours later, Sweeney sits slumped at the bar in a brothel-" I was like OH NO YOU DIDN'T, TODD. And he didn't. I sort of believed that he wouldn't, but... anyway. Then I was giggling because Lucy would just get a stroke if she knew that he had been in a whorehouse. And probably another stroke if she knew the reason.

When Nellie steppen into the kitchen and found Lucy there, I rubbed my hands together in anticipation of a good ol' well-written argument and you didn't disappoint me. It was delicious and infuriating at the same time. (Also, I sort of hope that someone would drive over Lucy with a brougham.)

Then NOOOOO TURNIP LEAVE ANTHONY ALONE! D'8 I've really started to like him in this, so I wish they don't hurt him.

Oh yes, confess to him, Nell. *punches air*

"What on earth…" The air smells of ale and cheap perfume. She wrinkles her nose. "Good lord, Mr. T. Is that you? Smells like you spent the day in a brothel!"

"I did," Mr. Todd says woodenly.

Eleanor almost chokes. "You did what?"

That part was hilarious.

Anyway, it was nice to hear from you again and visit 186 Fleet Street again (I've spent time around 221B Baker Street lately ;D).
Only sometimes insane chapter 13 . 2/15/2012
This was an awesome chapter, I'm glad to see you're still alive :p

I hope there will be more chapters soon, I can't wait to read them.
TheQueenOfScouts chapter 13 . 2/3/2012
Oh. My. God! This story is amazing! Everything is so well though out, and the characters are so in character - well, kind of, anyway - I can't help but love it!

I really like your writing style too.

Please update as soon as possible! ::
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