Reviews for Proof of Heaven
Yaoi-holic123 chapter 13 . 7/6/2012
WOW.
This story is simply amazing.
Let me say that I adore this idea, of Lucy and Johanna waiting for Sweeney safe and relatively sound at home. It's even better since it's written by such a great writer. :]
I read this a few days ago in almost one sitting. Stayed up till 5:00 AM. This is THAT good. I've been reading other great Sweenett fics too (all of yours, I'm reading Passing Strange at the moment), but I started reading this one for a second time, it's such an entertaining read. :D
The way you write Lucy and Johanna is perfect. They're pretty bland in the movie, so I can imagine it must be sort of hard to write for them without them seeming OOC, but you write them great. It's believable. I find myself angry with Lucy for how she's acting, yet I can sympathize with her. Johanna is so much more likable the way you write her, too. She has Nellie's spirit and fire. ;]
It'll be difficult to wait for an update, especially with such an intense situation for a clifhanger, but I shall! :D
libramoon-scorpiovenus chapter 13 . 7/5/2012
I really really missed this story- as I have been gone from the Sweeney world for quite some time. I can't even believe that I started reading this when you started it in 2009...

Anyway, I really love this story and this chapter was...wow. Sometimes beautiful things are better left with a simple 'wow'. I don't think I could convey my feelings any more adequately.

Hope life is good to you and I will keep an eye out for an update in the future.
Vi-Violence chapter 13 . 6/6/2012
Hatters used to use mercury in the hat making, it got into the blood and caused mental problems, hence the term "mad as a hatter", just had to say that. Love this, please update soon!
PirateNinjaCJS chapter 13 . 5/31/2012
OMGSH, hurry up and update, woman! This is amazing! All of your stories are amazing. Again, I am completely addicted to it, and if you don't update ASAP, I'm going to have a heart attack.

The relationship between Eleanor and Johanna is absolutely adorable. Lucy pisses me off beyond belief, she needs to go dig herself a hole so she can lie down in it and die. And Sweeney . . . he's just Sweeney. Yum.

UPDATE!
AwkwardOrchid chapter 13 . 5/24/2012
This story is so good! I really hope you finish it. It just got to the good part. :) xx
AwkwardOrchid chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Great story. I love how you've written Mrs Lovett.. especially talking about the weather. That was really cute! xx
mychakk chapter 13 . 5/16/2012
Hello

I just wanted to tell you that this is a story with THE plotline I was just dying to read. I hardly ever read unfinished stories, but I could not stay away from this. I want so badly to read a story with Sweeney Todd returing to his 'awating' wife (and others) only to realize nothing will beever as ut used to be. And this story is perfect. I also find myself enjoying the Johanna/Anthony parts too (never cared for those).

I really LOVE your characterization of Johanna (that she's not just a Lucy clone, but has a personality of her own. That her eyes are her Father's, that she share's personality traits - the woman's who has raised her.

I actually like (in my general dislike for her character) your Lucy. I've always pictured her as weak-willed, naive wiff of a girl. But I can buy her selfishness (even if it gritts on my nerves) 'cause she's this kind of girl that got everything she ever wanted simply because of her angelic looks. She nagers me with her demanding nad bossy nature and her diability to emphasize with anyone. She onlt sees her tragedy not noticing the suffering of others. Thit is exactly the Lucy I thought she'd be if she hadn't gone bonkers.

But most of all I love Sweenett of this story. How it was clear that Nellie is the one for Sweeney. Oh she might have not exactly be the one for Benjamin but she's THE one for .

There is only one tiny not-exactly-complain. As much as I adore and as much as I like your portrayal of her, she tends to be a bit of Mary-Sue-ish... Well not that much in this story. Altough she IS always there to help, slove, selflessly step-down and all... But she's here more ...human, more realistic, than she was in the Shadows Proves the Sunshine (she was VERY Mary-Sue-ish there... the unbreakable hero who stirs trouble and takes all the punishment... please don't get me wrong, I did adore that story as well.) Just thought I'll point out this little bit. For future references.

I hope to see an update sometime soon. :)

Wish you the best!
InsanityRunsInMyBlood chapter 13 . 4/14/2012
My goodness! I absolutely adore this fic! You HAVE to continue writing, please! The romance is developing, and I can smell it in the air! XD
Abbi chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
Hey! I love your story's so much but especially this one! You've left this at such a cliffhanger its unbearable! Please please please update soon before I go crazy? It would make my life. Xxx
Emita chapter 13 . 4/1/2012
Hello!

It has been SO LONG since I have read any fan fiction at all, but I stumbled upon this and I have spent the past hour and a half DEVOURING it. It's brilliant. I absolutely love how you're playing the Lucy/Lovett/Todd dynamic. It's very organic. I also love how you intertwine things from the original, from the pivotal (Pirelli, Turpin) to the small details (quotes, Mrs. Lovett's reference of daisies, et cetera).

Beautiful work. I cannot say enough good about it!
Laura Lestrange chapter 13 . 3/30/2012
please please please! update! PLEAASE D:
RubyRosette5 chapter 13 . 3/29/2012
please update !

I lovett !
Mystique84 chapter 13 . 3/29/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! totally amazing, and finally they kiss and Anthony is taken and so much is happening and you leave it for 2 months! come on missy! get back to writing!
Abbey chapter 13 . 3/26/2012
I love this story so much it's amazing! Please update soon the suspense is killing me!
kupkakeky chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
GAH! One of the worst places you could stop your story! I read one of your other stories and it got me hooked! I decided I needed something else to read, so I read this and I'm hooked on it too! I've noticed that you haven't updated in a few months. Please update soon. :)
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