Reviews for The Darkness in the Light
Ryuus2 chapter 10 . 1/20/2010
Hmm...is it just me, or do I smell sequal?

Good story by the way, very interesting. I really liked how you dealt with the three Riddles: Jesus incarnate, a badass killed badassly, and the normal wanker zapped into a hilarious parody of himsef. Very good.

Keep up the good writing.
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 10 . 9/5/2009
UPDATE, wat r u continueing this in
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 7 . 9/5/2009
confusing
Qtelatino1 chapter 10 . 8/22/2009
Very interesting twist on the HP universe. I like how you brought there dark side out. keep it up.
the shattered star chapter 10 . 8/20/2009
Short, but satisfying. Excellent, as usual. Bisous ~ the shattered star
Airlady chapter 5 . 8/19/2009
This is indeed really clever. I love parallel universes.
You Know Who chapter 10 . 8/19/2009
Impressive
the shattered star chapter 9 . 8/18/2009
Heh, excellent, as usual. Loved the witty dialogue in this chapter; the songs were hilarious as well. ;) Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 8 . 8/17/2009
Thomas... Ha ha. :D Anyway, hilarious chapter, as usual; glad to know your muse is back! That's it from me! Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 7 . 8/17/2009
Ha ha ha, Nympho... Lovely chapter by the way; yes, you should sack your muse. Sorry it took me so long to review; I was in an area with limited computer access for a while. ;) I suppose the wait was worth it; this chapter was great and I can't wait for the next. :D Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 6 . 4/25/2009
Ooh.. o_O I liked that chapter; intense. Fave line:

But Voldemort was God.. he had killed countless men.

Ha-ha! I thought the fighting in the very beginning could have been described a bit more. I would say describing is one of your weaker points... The dialogue in this chapter was definitely one of your stronger points though, so all in all great chapter. It went by kind of fast but I still thought it was good. OK, that's it from me. Waiting for your next update ;-) ~ the shattered star
Beth Hird chapter 5 . 4/23/2009
Wow! Really loved this story, made me laugh :D but was serious & gripping aswell! Thought you showed the opposites of the original characters really well,(especially Ron) & I like how it includes abit of everything (comedy, action, abit of romance e.t.c). Definitely 5/5 stars from me :D! Beth x
the shattered star chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
WHY ISN'T ANYONE REVIEWING? They should... TO begin, favorite line:

I signed on for power, wealth, maybe some screwing, and none of that’s happening.

I laughed for a while when I read that! The 'twist' was sickedly epic! Awesome, seriously. (by twist I'm referring to the fact that the real world isn't as it seems either; Ron never found Hermione and Harry etc...) I am honestly in love with this fic; it's by far the most... original/quirky I've read. (That's a complement ;)) OK, that's it from me... Bye! Bisous ~ the shattered star
David Fishwick chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
Scary but well written idea and I liked the evil versions of the Golden Trio. Please write more thanks.
the shattered star chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Heyy! Last review for the day.. (You'd better reply!) I think I'm getting a bit confused with the alternate dimension Harry and co and the real one. Not too much but just a bit. I can still figure it out, but keep that in mind. Favorite line:

The entire chest area was burned so badly that parts of it were blackened ash, and over this was a thin layer of what looked vaguely like Clingfilm but what was actually a magical restorative, at work even as they watched, slowly nibbling away at it. Harry closed his eyes, not wishing to look at the deformity of what had once been a perfect body. Four words were etched in white, untouched skin.

Ew. I like that though; 'twas quite... realistic if that makes sense. As in that's what a parallel universe Dumbledore would do. How long is this story going to be? Hopefully longer than it seems it'll be now... I'm thinking like 10 chapters max? PLEASE make it longer! Oh yeah, this chapter was a bit short... Sorry, I'm ravenous for your writing. Truly it is quite original. Keep up the excellent work, update soon and make the chapters longer! That's it from me! Bisous ~ the shattered star
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