Reviews for The Darkness in the Light
Iryelb chapter 10 . 7/7/2016
This was an interesting idea, everyone seemed a little to casual about certain things but otherwise I really enjoyed reading this.
Ryuus2 chapter 10 . 1/20/2010 it just me, or do I smell sequal?

Good story by the way, very interesting. I really liked how you dealt with the three Riddles: Jesus incarnate, a badass killed badassly, and the normal wanker zapped into a hilarious parody of himsef. Very good.

Keep up the good writing.
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 10 . 9/5/2009
UPDATE, wat r u continueing this in
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 7 . 9/5/2009
Qtelatino1 chapter 10 . 8/22/2009
Very interesting twist on the HP universe. I like how you brought there dark side out. keep it up.
the shattered star chapter 10 . 8/20/2009
Short, but satisfying. Excellent, as usual. Bisous ~ the shattered star
Airlady chapter 5 . 8/19/2009
This is indeed really clever. I love parallel universes.
You Know Who chapter 10 . 8/19/2009
the shattered star chapter 9 . 8/18/2009
Heh, excellent, as usual. Loved the witty dialogue in this chapter; the songs were hilarious as well. ;) Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 8 . 8/17/2009
Thomas... Ha ha. :D Anyway, hilarious chapter, as usual; glad to know your muse is back! That's it from me! Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 7 . 8/17/2009
Ha ha ha, Nympho... Lovely chapter by the way; yes, you should sack your muse. Sorry it took me so long to review; I was in an area with limited computer access for a while. ;) I suppose the wait was worth it; this chapter was great and I can't wait for the next. :D Bisous ~ the shattered star
the shattered star chapter 6 . 4/25/2009
Ooh.. o_O I liked that chapter; intense. Fave line:

But Voldemort was God.. he had killed countless men.

Ha-ha! I thought the fighting in the very beginning could have been described a bit more. I would say describing is one of your weaker points... The dialogue in this chapter was definitely one of your stronger points though, so all in all great chapter. It went by kind of fast but I still thought it was good. OK, that's it from me. Waiting for your next update ;-) ~ the shattered star
Beth Hird chapter 5 . 4/23/2009
Wow! Really loved this story, made me laugh :D but was serious & gripping aswell! Thought you showed the opposites of the original characters really well,(especially Ron) & I like how it includes abit of everything (comedy, action, abit of romance e.t.c). Definitely 5/5 stars from me :D! Beth x
the shattered star chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
WHY ISN'T ANYONE REVIEWING? They should... TO begin, favorite line:

I signed on for power, wealth, maybe some screwing, and none of that’s happening.

I laughed for a while when I read that! The 'twist' was sickedly epic! Awesome, seriously. (by twist I'm referring to the fact that the real world isn't as it seems either; Ron never found Hermione and Harry etc...) I am honestly in love with this fic; it's by far the most... original/quirky I've read. (That's a complement ;)) OK, that's it from me... Bye! Bisous ~ the shattered star
David Fishwick chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
Scary but well written idea and I liked the evil versions of the Golden Trio. Please write more thanks.
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