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Biggest idiot in existence? Sure, if i don't mention that sonic was the one who blew it out. With Elise.

That was very nice! I love the portrayal of character, emotion and the humor. The ending was quite funny. Very nice! It's nice to see a Sonic 06 story like this. Even though I hated the game I always wondered what Sonic's point of view was like in this scene. You know, since he was dead.

You did a great job capturing his personality.

Your portrayal of Sonic is great. He's the lovable free spirit in this story. Your writing style is a good blend of action and humor, which is something I like to look for in a story. Awesome job.

Wow very good. I loved Sonic Next Gen too - the critics went too mad on it and its bad points and i thought that it was good Sonic Team tried with someone different. You described Sonic's own emotions and feelings so well! It really brings your imagination to life when you read it.

Hah, cool. I almost forgot that none of this ever happened now. Here we have Sonic completely oblivious to the fact that the flame WAS real, and he was the one who blew it out! Ironic. Again, you captured the moment very well.

And this: 'I pointed myself in the direction of Soleanna, smirking when I accidentally on purpose uprooted Rouge’s and Shadow’s tent and caked their machines in mud, escaping to a cacophony of threats and general yelling at my rear.'

'Accidentally on purpose.' Nice. I chuckled.

For some reason, I've never been able to describe Sonic running in my fiction, but you do a great job of it. 'My feet hammered the golden ground beneath me' and 'the wind split with a BOOM and gave me passage' amongst other smoothly-flowing descriptions. It almost had a poetic feel to it, if you know what I mean.

Ah, Sonic. He'll rush through crowds, trespass, land on the roofs of families' houses... and then later save the same people he annoyed the crap out of. Typical Sonic. _

Great adaptation. The lightheartedness was a nice way to end this. You know, it'd be cool to see some more Sonic stuff from you. I have you on my author alerts just in case.

~DC

This story is a fantastic piece of work that not only captures the essense of Sonic as a character, but is balanced perfectly with action and emotion. Definitely the best piece of fiction I've come across lately. Everything just WORKED. It flowed, no sentences were awkward to read and there were no spelling/grammar issues.

I liked how Sonic was serious and determined when he needed to be, but still able to be humorous. It suits him well. Sonic's 'conversations' with Solaris - especially towards the end of Chapter 2 - were very creative and captured his steafast personality.

I could go through and quote some of your lines in this and go on about why I loved them so much, but I think I'll just say great job and leave it at that. This story definitely deserves more reviews than it currently has - though judging by how well you typed, I'd venture to guess that you don't type for reviews, you type because you enjoy it.

Adding this to my C2. :)

~DC

...WOW! That was wonderful!I loved it!It had great word choice,I didnt notice any spellin errors!it was fantastic!thank you for givig us a good story!