|Reviews for In Pieces|
| ShadowMarez chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
TT_TT ... this made me want to cry. Brilliant story !
| Kakuhida4ever chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
it was good but i swear by the end i was holding back tears,l feel so bad 4 hidan.
| Kuroi-Sannaichi chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Awe! I find it cute!
| Shail666 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
For your first fanfic it's well done. I'm not usually a big fan of song-fics, but I'm pleased to say that you integrated it well, and it didn't dominate the storyline.
I would like to suggest though that when you're making a summary, dont say you suck at summaries and that it's your first. It doesnt make people want to read your stories.
Instead you should write about what the story is about, in this case with them getting it on and coming to a silent understanding of one another(a cold one...).
Anyway, good job!
| iamofthedesert chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Wow. This was REALLY good! I liked it a lot! Great job.