Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This book is unrealistic. Nobody is this lucky. How is it possible that Maya always happens to be at the right place at the right time. She "accidentally" comes across the information she wants and even the "rare" plants she requires. At first I tried to let it slide but it's getting boring now. And let me guess, the bleeding on Tom's chest is one of the side-effects of creating a Horcrux, and that's why she just happened to come across that book? I know it's just a fanfic, but it is too UNREALISTIC. Oh and don't even get me started on Maya's continued justifications for her evil acts. There is no grey are, it's black or white. I would vent more but I'll stop here to avoid offending you. |
![]() ![]() Update soon. Congrats for having a babe |
![]() ![]() Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update update update update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You most definitely still have a lot of readers ;) Myself, I've been following the story for over two years and I love every single chapter. It's very different than most stories featuring Tom and Hermione and that's why it's one of my favourites. Don't stop updating, you're doing a great job! Congrats on having a baby! |
![]() ![]() Please, please, please update soon, love everything about this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're amazed me by writing a single chapter that seems never end ...sooo long. you're amazing how can you do that? is it your typing speed? sorry oot comment XD I noticed two misplaced wordschecks instead of cheeks and want instead of what. but it still amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're amazed me by writing a single chapter that seems never end ...sooo long. you're amazing how can you do that? is it your typing speed? sorry oot comment XD I noticed two misplaced wordschecks instead of cheeks and want instead of what. but it still amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() mione's very sad and her coping mecanism was sort of similiar to me. you wrote mione's vulnerability very well..and honest |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was really giggling to susan and mione conversation haha it's funny and silly...but then the cuts and bloods. albeit its paradox, I look forward for updates XD thanks for sharing the story...I'm a new passenger in the ship |
![]() ![]() Great job! Love your story. Please update. |
![]() ![]() Love your story! |
![]() ![]() Update plassssss |
![]() ![]() Omg. I just came across this fic curious about this ship and here i am. This is wonderful! |
![]() ![]() hello, luv. Hope ur doing well. Please update soon |