Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
Guest chapter 35 . 7/22/2017
omg!didn't expect an update!even though I had to reread the last chapters(bcz I remember how much I loved it before) it was totally worth it..amazing chapter, now I'm hooked again! can't wait for the next update!
ps. I'm not a native English speaker, sorry if there's any mistake
ely107 chapter 1 . 7/22/2017
o m g im so glad you are back and updated this story. i favorited this story back in 2014 hoping you would continue writing. so happy you finally updated it i cant wait to read the rest of this story!
hashtagwinks chapter 11 . 7/11/2017
Hi, how are you doing? I just wanna say that I love your story.
Melli chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Perhaps consider allowing someone else adopt this story? I first read this a few years ago and have a few times again. It's too good to not be finished. If you cannot, I understand. But I'm sure an author you like could finish it for you if you tell them where you want it to go.
Naysu chapter 34 . 5/24/2017
this is my 12th time re-reading your fanfic. I wish you are well and healthy and most of all I wish you update.
guest chapter 34 . 4/19/2017
Please update this is one of the best Tomione fanfictions :)
Lisa chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
I've literally been following this story for like...four years. It's been almost two years now, I really hope that you are okay, as I've seen you say you always finish a story.

I really, really hope there's more soon.

Take care!
AnnaLee chapter 34 . 3/12/2017
More ;)
smithback chapter 34 . 2/18/2017
Hi!

I hope that you are fine and well...

Yes, I would love to see more of this great fic.

but really, I hope that you are o.k.
Lucy Maud Montgomery chapter 11 . 1/19/2017
Wtf she's head girl now. Inconceivable!
Lucy Maud Montgomery chapter 8 . 1/19/2017
Something about it seems forced. And rushed. Im going to persevere and attempt to get through it.
Amanda Samsam chapter 34 . 12/15/2016
Hey. I really love your story. Please tell me you will update soon. I can't wait to read more of your work. This story is wonderfully written. I liked how you tried to make things in a realistic way, where Tom and Hermione's relationship will slowly develop over time. I don't like stories where Hermione is portrayed as strong and Tom is all fluffy. This simply didn't go along with the character profile build up by Rowling! I am also starting my first Voldemort/Hermione fanfiction, entitled "Horcrux Love". You may check out my profile if you have the time and tell me what you think about my plot! I really liked your ideas and where this story is going. It is one of the more interesting ones that I have read in a while. Do update soon! I hope to hear from you soon! XXXXX

Best
Amanda Samsam
Ayo chapter 34 . 11/29/2016
Hey, I've been reading this fic of yours since last year and been waiting for it \\3 anyway, will you follow or move this story till they graduate/till they became an adult? Just asking.
May you update soon
Lay chapter 34 . 11/12/2016
Update soon or tomorrow or anytime..just pleasse update
aricechan63 chapter 33 . 10/31/2016
I know you haven't updated this story for one year but I pray that one day you will find inspiration to finish it.
This story and I mean it, is the most realistic, non- Mary-sue Tomione story I have ever read.(and trust me I have read a lot). I have to agree with everything you say in the comments. You stayed true to all characters and you added parts that make them more interesting. I love how in contrast to other stories you made Hermione more realistic with all these deep feelings that made her human. This is how it should be. I can't believe people are saying that she is weak. If any of those people experienced only half from what she experienced they would be mad. She is not weak, she has courage to go on and she hasn't lost her mind yet.
As for Tom I must say that I love what you did there. I can't wait to found out more about him. I strongly believe too that you are never borned evil. The things that you experience in life, the mistakes that you make always scar you but also make you more strong. I really like how Tom is so true to its character and don't go soft like other fanfics.
Tom is definetaly evil, twisted and very deeply scarred or even traumatized.
However since he is still human and not Voldemord yet he shows some feelings and that's completely understandable. People have to understand that humans aren't one-sided. The complicated feelings and emotions is what makes us what we are.
And you managed to make that true along with creating strong and deep emotions that it is really hard to achieve. Your writing is so full of real feelings and it makes me want to keep reading since I can feel empathy for the characters. This story is definetaly not for kids but for people that don't live in their bubble.
I really hope that you will continue the story but even if you don't I wish you the best!
Sorry for my mistakes, English is not my first language.
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