Wow first FFn
edits my posts
nd now they look
like I'm talking
in gibberish.

Take a chocolates.
Have some coke
with chicken a
songs and then
...UPDATE.

Take a chocolates.
Munch on some pizza.
Enjoy awesome
flicks and then...UPDATE.

Please please please
update soon.
I'm extremely addicted to
this one.
It would be great to have a
new chappie to sink my teeth
into.
Xoxo

Great story so far! Pleeeeeease write more?

Please update.

Good chapter (;

Please write more? Love your story:)

Love it, this is one of my favourite fanfiction by far

of course Susan will never believe Hermione lol
ah the 40s huh ..cosmetics were only allowed after classes and on weekend? that's quite interesting
ahah must be so embarrassing for Hermione to turn up wearing the forgotten make up
so they created Wolfsbane, congrats I guess;;
I am really curious about what's going to happen next since they finished their project, Hermione's plan with the broom failed and her slowly getting over her serious depression and guilt
I think the characters are realistic, I mean in other stories I've read Tom is way too fast intrigued by the time traveller for example. It's much more reasonable that both, the Hermione and TR, develop or change their thoughts about the other very slow. Old habits die hard and so does hate and thought's of revenge.
in general love it !

that chapter was great! I knew Hermione was wearing a Slytherin badge, all these reactions she didn't understand :D
I'm kinda glad Slytherin won the match even though I'm mostly neutral but I admit I wouldn't like Tom to lose idek, and Xavian's jealousy got the better of him-
in the end Dumbledore was the victim of the cursed broom didn't expect that!
I think Hermione's reaction and depression at the end were very realistic I think ...I understand her guilt and shame

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sooooon ! Im literalllly DYING over here to find out what happens nextttttt !
I LOVE IT !

no such thing as good or evil, evil, Nagini, Dark arts, I love unforgivables? I laughed so hard when Hermione tried to find the password ahaha listing things she immediately associated with Tom lmao
I love this story! your writing is really good and the plot is great and I really like your characterizations
I slightly wonder why Tom is like a feared outcast in Slytherin because I always thought he had especially them under his sway
anyway can't wait to read more! I'm still shocked about what Tom is doing to himself, Hermione's perspective is very interesting

I really like your story. I read everything in 3 days or so. Please update soon!

Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua história, posta logo por favor