Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
Maelia Airwood chapter 34 . 7/14/2015
I really love your story, and I disagree with those that say you are taking it too slowly: I think anything faster would be unrealistic and one of the best qualities of your amazing story is its realism.
I do not want to pressure you, since I knw thatthe chapters are really long and itmust take a lot oftime to write them, but I really can't wait til your next update and I hope it will be very soon :)
Thank you again for this beautiful story
Guest chapter 34 . 7/14/2015
Amazing work ! ;D
Hedwig3101 chapter 34 . 7/11/2015
I love, love, LOVE this new chapter! Well, of course I am obsessed with the whole thing but I'm just so happy you've updated so quickly and it's simply amazing!
RiaMkjee chapter 34 . 7/8/2015
OH MY GODDDDDDD !
I was really depressed this morning for personal reasons and then I checked my phone and saw an update! I literally wanted to get up and dance ! :D

I would like to say Thank you for making my day.

New chapter *thumbs up*
Chapter 33 made me go like woahhh! Especially with Tom forcing her to eat, I didnt think you would upload THIS soon but I am so so so happpy that you did
Was dying to know what would happen next. Tom's feelings for Hermione have definitely been changing, any idiot can see that -.-
And the main reason why I love this story so much is because the change is gradual. It keeps things very very real. Also, I know that Tom always hated Xavian and would look for any chance to beat him up, but I kind of felt like it was more than just that. Very "knight in shining armor", dont you think? :)
Love how they r getting along in this new chappie. Wonder if he thinks shes in love with him (like the rest of the school) especially considering how shes started behaving around him AND she came to the library with makeup on! I would love to see how he reacts to his hormones yayyyyyy!

Also please update even quicker this time. I know you can do it ! I love this storyyyyyy ! I think I'm going to read the whole thing all over again right now hehehe !

Take care and update !
xx
Smithback chapter 34 . 7/7/2015
woow! another awesome chapter, thanks a lot for updating
Sammy chapter 34 . 7/7/2015
Can't wait for the update and to learn what Hermuones next mursder plan will be! I can't imagine what Tom would do if he was injured/nearly killed and finds out Hermione planned it!
satoz chapter 34 . 7/6/2015
Squeeeeeeee! Thanks for the update! Love it! Really curious what else went through Tom's mind when he saw Hermione with makeup if anything
Someone's Charm chapter 33 . 7/6/2015
I'd already started on the chapter 33 review, so I feel the need to finish this one before commenting on your latest update.
Goodness, and it was so long, which is perfect to me. I actually went back a few chapters to remind myself what is going on in the story. I never find rereading this fic a hassle!
Gosh gosh, I've been so excited about seeing what happens of Hermione's plan. I became nervous for her as the time approached, like something would pop up to ruin everything. When she was pulled aside on her way to the Quidditch match, I hated it for her. I felt her nerves and shared in it. Skip all of this posing and the photos and whatnot! It was great stewing in that suspense!
Initially, I suspected Susan gave Hermione a badge that would change based on some emotion, like the so-called neutral badge was supposed to reveal who she really wanted to win. I liked being surprised that it really was something so simple, small, and careless as bumping into a kid and switching badges.
Interesting as Quidditch matches were as a kid, I'm glad you kept it short and sweet without being too quick about it. I liked how you made Tom win by his usual means of being clever enough to outsmart rather than simply outmaneuver Xavian. I was a little surprised that Hermione seemed to be feeling so little doubt in her plan, but I recalled she'd been exhaustbly planning each little step. Hermione would indeed believe as much in her abilities and planning to underestimate fate stepping in her way. At this point, it really must be fate! That series of events we come to know of seem to prove Hermione's destiny is meant to be more complicatedly intertwined with Riddle's than either realize.
Oh! I'm really curious to see what this "ice king" bit is about and where it'll lead. I'm surprised the reporter was allowed into a questioning that was school/ministry business. That whole scene led to even more stress and drama for the day, culminating in that fantastic scene between Hermione, Xavier, Shiv, and Riddle. It was so interesting how that went down, especially in what it revealed of their characters.
You did a fantastic job writing about Hermione's depression after failing. I could completely understand why she ended up that way. These past chapters have proven that life has a pattern of cruelty with her. Riddle has tortured, intimidated, and attacked her along with being the future murderer of everyone she loves, yet the entire school is determined to suppose they're a pair. It's sick. And after three painfully executed assassination attempts, she's no closer to her goal. It does all feel hopeless. Him forcing her out of her room to eat is even more of a slap in the face.
Also, I see your author's notes and feel sorry that reviewers are making you feel such a need to explain yourself. I don't think anyone should demand such a thing. Three months have passed timeline-wise. Of course the build-up to an eventual relationship would be slow and full of many, so many events. By this point in the story, any discerning reader would pick up that Riddle think something of her already.
In Hermione's shoes, I'd easily and readily find a way to explain any of Riddle's kinder acts as self-serving. And to a degree, I bet they are. I would say he fed her, because a half-starved or worse Hermione would lead to even more unwanted attention for him, her "boyfriend," according to the Hogwarts' population of gossips. But I part of his actions do occasionally give away his more positive feelings toward her.
Tom has never had a friend, so he's unaccustomed to liking anyone. His positive emotions toward Hermione must be confusing for him, and early on, he probably interpreted them as something else. Disgusted, Hermione almost successfully denies away her attraction to him. I think that it will be very interesting when both realize what develops between them in the chapters to come.
Thank you!
keeeeeez chapter 34 . 7/6/2015
great chapter again!
nikif chapter 34 . 7/6/2015
Always excellent :)

thanks to share with us

xxx
Roxolana5 chapter 34 . 7/5/2015
Thanks-thank you for chapter! XD
Great story!
LadyNorth76 chapter 34 . 7/5/2015
I'm so happy to see a new chapter from you. I can't wait for more! Thanks!
tango chapter 33 . 7/4/2015
please, pretty please, update soon this awesome story
Guest chapter 33 . 7/1/2015
It really is an amazing update
123Ekaterina chapter 33 . 6/30/2015
I just wanted to say that this is my favorite Tom/Hermione story ever. There are a lot of other cool ones out there but I like this one because how realistic it is. They haven't even kissed yet and it's 33rd chapter and yet I feel the romance. I love their interactions and love how Tom force fed her food. Your Hermione is really realitic and that's what I love about you as a writer. Please keep on the good work.
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