Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
Guest chapter 33 . 6/28/2015
please update this
Guest chapter 33 . 6/28/2015
This story is amazing, I couldn't stop reading it. I agree with what you say about Tom and Hermione's character, you wrote them perfectly, in my opinion. I think people just don't understand because most of the other Tomione stories depict Tom as a player and gets interested by Hermione too easily, they also present Hermione too intelligently when it's evident in the books that her knowledge is dependent on books. I like how you didn't make her as strong or as intelligent as Tom because she's probably not in comparison to him, I mean he is obviously going to be the future dark lord. I love your writing style and I think you're brilliant with this story so please don't give up on it. I hope you feel better from the suicidal thoughts if you still have them, just remember there are people who respect you and are there for you. I can't wait for your next update, I'm new to reading this so I don't know how often you update but hopefully soon xx
keeeeeez chapter 33 . 6/24/2015
amazing drama! update soon...
Maelia Airwood chapter 33 . 6/19/2015
I think this story is beautiful, and I think you are doing a great job at keeping Hermione in character :)
Update soon, please :)
Bye
jennyjenny chapter 33 . 6/4/2015
I seriously love this story,it's one of my favotites!I like the way you build the relationship up,can't wait to read the next chapter!
ShezzaBoo0233 chapter 33 . 6/2/2015
Loving the story so far :D I'm really looking forward to some feelings starting to occur between them :) I am curious though from what I can remember she has shown any of her scars from the war in her time, has she covered them up or something and if so I think that could be used as a way of getting through to Tom :) otherwise I absolutely love your story. Hope you update ASAP! xxSB0233
Jenny chapter 33 . 5/27/2015
Its one heck of a story...luv to see another chapee up the awesome work.
Guest chapter 32 . 5/27/2015
Really love this story!
riamukherjee50 chapter 33 . 5/27/2015
I almost couldnt believe my eyes when I saw your update.
Im so thrilled to see tom and hermione's relationship progressing.. Its sooo EXCITING ! I've been waiting for this day for months !
Please please update sooner, I know these things need time and morivation, I just wanted you to know that you have all my support and I love you !
Continue writing..
Cheers ! Xx
Thatweridone chapter 33 . 5/25/2015
New reader here and LOVING your story- the plot is so unique and it really captures me. Your writing style is such an easy read and it's really fluid. I just love this story so much ( I just binge read it for 2 and a half hours straight
Oppies :) keep updating!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
In England it's guilty until proven innocent. Also, Dumbledore's beard was auburn when he was young. He's a red head! :D
Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 33 . 5/18/2015
The first Year Troll was different, Hermione didn't look for the troll she lied to stop Harry and Ron from getting in trouble for rescuing her as she cried in the bathroom...

Though since she was wiling to outright lie to McGonagall's face your point doesn't change much.

And with Umbridge... it was well-known her absolute hatred of half-human beings, Centaurs in HP universe are more... spiritual then in the greek stories so I believe Hermione thought Umbridge who was a little unhinged and high on power at the time would open her fat mouth and do something stupid... which she did. Hermione i believe wouldn't leave someone to the mercy of Centaurs that were like from OUR world knowingly, that would be Way to sadistic and cruel

Other then that I agree with everything else you said and I hope you Update soon

btw Does Tom Riddle have hormones as well or is he a completely committed sociopath at this point?
Lady Merope Riddle chapter 33 . 5/17/2015
Omg! U finally updated! I was over the moon when I checked my notifications/author alerts! I have just finished exams, and this is the best stress relieve and the first holiday get away for me! I just love the story and anything in it. But this chapter is rather intense, the way Tom and Mione tried to understand their own feelings. And Susan is just so annoying, haha. But I like the plot all the same. Lovely twist. Hope to hear from u soon. Maybe another update before my birthday in June? That'll be the best birthday present ever! Please! I love u and also ur story sooooooo much! :d
Guest chapter 33 . 5/16/2015
I like this and everything but it's chapter 33 and honestly you haven't redeemed Tom one bit. I mean I understand, he's the dark lord, he's bound to be as evil as it gets. But come on, he still seemingly hates Hermione's guts.
Smithback chapter 33 . 5/15/2015
Wow! Intense chapter.

I am so happy for this update
I like how you portrait Hermione and Tom. I have no deep analysis of characters or history; I just enjoy reading your story a lot.

Luck, bye

so, thanks a lot for updating
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