Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
Herdcat chapter 30 . 8/31/2012
I just found this story and have enjoyed it immensely - I have read various versions of this pairing but your portrayal of both Hermione and Riddle is different and refreshing. I enjoyed the ways you demonstrated Riddle's troubled childhood - including the vulnerabilities it would have left him with as well as the skills he had attained. The idea that he suffered from some unusual illness was also fascinating - it would go some way to explaining his obsession with conquering death - it also makes sense that the purebloods of his generation would have been reluctant to follow someone with a muggle name straight away. Out of all the fics I have read I don't think I once came across the idea that Dumbledore might have been wrong about Riddle's decisions at any stage. I also liked that Hermione's reluctant attraction to him does not in any way compromise her determination to kill him - you kept them both very in character - and Slughorn is hilarious! a pleasure to have discovered your story I hope you plan to write more
Isabel chapter 30 . 8/22/2012
I abs love this story and I hope you're hanging in there, and I'm very sorry you suffer such bad depression
Azure for Sure chapter 30 . 8/21/2012
Update soon! I can't wait until they kiss or... If they kiss? LOL, either way, fantastic story!
gemini-rose16 chapter 30 . 8/18/2012
update soon xxxx
MooNOrchiD chapter 30 . 8/17/2012
Absolutely amazing. Just want to point out, u made the mistake of saying the flowers were orchids when in previous chapters they were crysanthemums...
I really hope she gets to beat the crap out of him once. It seems like she's always loosing against him. I know it must be this way. But it's still annoying.
Oh I also had this wacky feeling, when u mentioned his chest bleeding, that he cut out his heart...I know crazy...
Guest chapter 30 . 8/17/2012
Update soon please:)
Guest chapter 30 . 8/15/2012
Great job, please update soon! Your grammar is not horrible and the characterization is true. Riddle would never change from one small duel with Hermionie etc. I believe that is the problem with most stories-Tom changes too quickly. You have just the right pace. It is interesting that Hermionie is keeping the flowers...

Forget about the broom plan Hermionie, just run up and hug Riddle-he'll die of a heart attack right there! It is bothering me that Hermionie is so submissive. Who wants Hermionie to be tortured? She is my favorite character:)

Again your grammar is fine. We all make small errors, I think people who have issues and negatively criticize you regarding it should go jump in a cold lake.

Sorry for the long review. Update soon!
Dinobunny chapter 30 . 8/14/2012
Oh man. This story is freaking awesome! I really really love it:D and meh all the grammatical errors and stuff that u apologised for... I'm not really bothered by them 'cause I'm just so caught up in the story! u mentioned ur depression and stuff too... Maybe it's smth that's happening in ur life or well smth, but cheer up k!:) Things will always work out in the end:) and even of they don't, well... It's not the end of the world and all that...xP i suffered from bouts of depression for a while last year too...xP but yea. I've learned to get over things and deal with it... Oh but enoug of all this gloomy talk. This story is really really awesome so I'll be looking forward to ur next update yea!:) and I hope the chrysanthemums stay there for a long long while. It's sweet:D
Trelaney chapter 30 . 7/31/2012
This story is epic. I love how you make it realistic and not just instant attraction then boom love. I enjoy this story so much I lost sleep over it and I love my sleep. Keep up the good work.
rainblo15 chapter 30 . 7/30/2012
I have been non-stop reading this story since I started it!:) it's amazing! Please update soon!:)
Aristotletruth chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
Despite all of your grammar errors and lack of question marks, I think this is one of the best Riddle/Granger stories out there. I can't imagine how good your writing must be in your own language. And your interpretation of Voldemort is very much in character. So refreshing! Keep up the good work and ignore the hurtful comments.

Your brand new fan,

Annakene chapter 30 . 7/30/2012
wow , this is hands down the best tomione fanfic i have ever read , seriously . i came across it yesterday evening and by this morning I finished all 30 chapters . I wanted to spread it for longer ( as i always do with very good things ) but i failed , because this story is like a drug . :D i hope that you will update soon .

I also read the author notes . I hope you are doing well now .:)

best regards,
Sialia-currucoides chapter 30 . 7/30/2012
Are those flowers harmful? Do they have some kind of a role in the story line?
I actually don't feel really happy with this chapter... it is very well written and all but... what I don't like is how Hermione in lying and relishing Tom's respect. By now, she should be ashamed and for once try to create her own spell and prove her first impression on Tom wrong. I mean, she could really try and work on the counter-spell of that sectumsempra spell...
Tom is thinking of her as a 'Goddess' when she is the opposite... sure she must feel happy when he gives her respect but he isn't really respecting her! If he knew everything he would call her a cheater and a brainless nincompoop.
I hate Dippet and all the rules, in total Slytherin only lost 10 points while Ravenclaw lost a 100 when Hermione didn't do anything wrong! What was she to do? Let the boy be harmed and go run off to a Professor? Or better, just get attacked by Lestrange! How stupid can the school get?
Anyway, good work with the story.
Noodlegum chapter 30 . 7/27/2012
holy crap, this is amazing, like hands down amazing. keep up the great work! :)
Serashia chapter 30 . 7/26/2012
I would like to tell you that your story is just amazing. i could not stop reading it since i started it this morning. i love how at the beginning how they acted towards each other are very realistic. the way your showing slight differneces in their actions as they progress to the romance you stated makes me smile all the time. i hope your doing alright. i will be waiting for the next update. thank you for writing this story.
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