Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
Anonymous chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
Thank you so much for making Tom a more skilled with magic than Hermione. It makes this story so much more enjoyable. I am just adding it to my favorites section. Will you please update soon? The chapters are wonderful. I love the way Tom actually seems to understand magic, not just memorize textbooks like Hermione.
ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
This is cool! Update soon!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
ScatteredVisionShatteredDreams chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
How fun is his? I approve and annot wait until you continue.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
Please update soon! Maybe you could just kill one or two patients? The story is wonderful and I can't wait to see what you will do with Tom. I like the fact that he is emotionless. So many books seem to ignore the obvious fact that if he had showed his true nature through bad manners, bullying or snubbing than no one would have ever told him about things like Horcruxes. Please keep him relatively emotionless. One minor detail I wanted to mention, was the fact that he got a magical merit award. Because Hermione did not,I think it can be reasonably inferred that he was more talented with magic than her. I know it's a big thing to ask and really, very few fan fictions have managed it, but can you add that extra element of realism to your very enjoyable work and make Tom better than Hermione in their classes? I mean, she was always "the brightest witch" of her age, not the brightest wizard. (Not that Tom was her age)
Perseus 9 chapter 6 . 4/22/2009
I like the flowers he conjured, nice. Update soon.
amorreal chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
update soon! it sounds like itll be an entertaining fic!
Herm chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
I can't believe Susan said that :). Please update soon.
Marsgoddess1 chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
Good chapter I can't wait for classes. I want Hermione to impress our heir. Maybe bneat him in a duel, or atleast Malfoy.
Marsgoddess1 chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
'Maya' better be careful Tom is always on guard, even if he seems relaxed. Tom is afraid to die so he won't allow room for relaxing. Good Chapter!
ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
Cool! Update soon! Susan was... Disturbing...
Lillian McKinnley chapter 7 . 4/21/2009

Ich just began reading the story and I really like it ) Please go on!:)
Charlotte chapter 6 . 4/20/2009
The love bite/wand mark thing was funny!

It made me all giggly.. LOL

Cissa chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
awesome! i jus love this fic

plese update soon!
941 | « Prev Page 1 .. 52 59 60 61 62 63 Next »