Reviews for Unmasking the heir of Slytherin
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
Please update soon! Maybe you could just kill one or two patients? The story is wonderful and I can't wait to see what you will do with Tom. I like the fact that he is emotionless. So many books seem to ignore the obvious fact that if he had showed his true nature through bad manners, bullying or snubbing than no one would have ever told him about things like Horcruxes. Please keep him relatively emotionless. One minor detail I wanted to mention, was the fact that he got a magical merit award. Because Hermione did not,I think it can be reasonably inferred that he was more talented with magic than her. I know it's a big thing to ask and really, very few fan fictions have managed it, but can you add that extra element of realism to your very enjoyable work and make Tom better than Hermione in their classes? I mean, she was always "the brightest witch" of her age, not the brightest wizard. (Not that Tom was her age)
Perseus 9 chapter 6 . 4/22/2009
I like the flowers he conjured, nice. Update soon.
amorreal chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
update soon! it sounds like itll be an entertaining fic!
Herm chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
I can't believe Susan said that :). Please update soon.
Marsgoddess1 chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
Good chapter I can't wait for classes. I want Hermione to impress our heir. Maybe bneat him in a duel, or atleast Malfoy.
Marsgoddess1 chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
'Maya' better be careful Tom is always on guard, even if he seems relaxed. Tom is afraid to die so he won't allow room for relaxing. Good Chapter!
ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
Cool! Update soon! Susan was... Disturbing...
Lillian McKinnley chapter 7 . 4/21/2009

Ich just began reading the story and I really like it ) Please go on!:)
Charlotte chapter 6 . 4/20/2009
The love bite/wand mark thing was funny!

It made me all giggly.. LOL

Cissa chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
awesome! i jus love this fic

plese update soon!
Marsgoddess1 chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Veery small interaction with Tom so far but I think its important to establish your settings in plot before you get to the meat of the story. That's a nice twist Harry's wand, the fates know. Good job! Don't worry about not getting too many reviews just continue to write a good story.
Marsgoddess1 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Good story! I like it, Its not too cliche. I like it so far you should continue. I don't like Dippet he seems he's up to something with Tom unwillingly involved in the middle. Now it seems he's going to drag Hermione in.
signy33 chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
I should be revising too, but i'm reading your fic, so please write the next chapter quickly ! I love this story, it's enthralling (maybe this is too much a word to qualify a fanfiction, but i didn't know how to say it in another way).
Perseus 9 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
I love it. I put it on Alert list. Update soon.
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