Reviews for A Tale of Three Kunoichi
Thorn In Your Side chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Good, hm. _
TorrentJ chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
... Oh, god... My head hurts... Good, though!
SilverWolfStar chapter 10 . 9/1/2009
Uh-oh is right! Whats gonna happen? Is 'Kotone' gonna be okay? how will Kana live without him if he doesn't make it? and what a girl Ikumi is! a Nara prodigy! awesomesauce story, keep it up!
SilverWolfStar chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
awah, cute Kana at the end! Will write longer review when i get to the last chapter!
Thorn In Your Side chapter 10 . 7/17/2009
better than the promises of her childhood,

I like that line. :D
Thorn In Your Side chapter 9 . 7/17/2009
Damn straight you got pwned. :D Ikumi~

I really liked the first bit of the fight. _
Thorn In Your Side chapter 8 . 6/15/2009
“I have to work with you?” said Katsutoshi.

“I have to work with you?” said Nasshi simultaneously.

At that moment, they realised that actually, they probably could work together.

Lolcakes fr srs, man. XD
Thorn In Your Side chapter 7 . 5/31/2009
:O And I was so proud of you writing a T-rated fic...

When you say M-rated missions with kunoichi important to them, are you implyin rape?

(if the censor bar got that, i'mma be pissed.)
Thorn In Your Side chapter 6 . 5/20/2009
XD Poor Nanami~
TorrentJ chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Heya Fee!

Just thought I'd share my thoughts, as I haven't for a few chapters.

You really have a thing for ice jutsus, don't you? And maybe you should change the summary to, "T for adult themes and genderbending"? And about Emiri: you said she was one of the Seven Swordsmen? Three problems with that: one, she'd have a Bingo Book entry. Two, I think the Swordsmen were all male (hence the name "SwordsMEN"). And three, I don't think all the Seven Swordsmen were Missing Nins. ~TJicebeam and a glitchy iPod keyboard~
Thorn In Your Side chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
What are we waiting for?” roared Tsume.

“The element of surprise.” said Hayate.

“Good idea.” said Asuma.

“Tonight.” promised Aoi.

I loved that part~

But Bane? D: Did you use Generic Evil Name no Jutsu?
Thorn In Your Side chapter 3 . 4/27/2009

Battles are indeed even more fun than plot~
Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
*waves enthusiastically at Nasshimaru*

Got lucky real quick there, huh? XD

OMG. FEE. Look up a story called "The Eccentric Files", by an author called "Ren and Missa" (except, you know, without the quote marks)

Its only ten chapters with nine hundred and twenty two reviews and its just SO GOD. :D
Coherent Truth chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Nice so far. Though are you purposely using OC's or do you dislike the real characters? Or have you just changed the names and personalities?

Thanks for your time,

Potential Paradox
TorrentJ chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
... Interesting...