|Reviews for Springtime & Temptation|
| darksoulwolf chapter 19 . 11/8/2009
this one was kick ass...
| violaskye chapter 6 . 5/27/2009
first things first, ive got to say that this whole series and idea of 50 words and less is extremely intelligent, not to mention awesome. being able to confine your thoughts into such little a words is highly interesting if not , does require alot of talent. short and sweet, its really good and anywhere to improve on? not much really.
i still love the way you condense your meaning.
you would do well in poetry. ]
| ChasingProse chapter 24 . 5/21/2009
That last one was my favorite. Simply put, but beautiful.
P.S. I have faithfully reviewed every single chapter in the last 20 minutes, and have now septuplified (spelling?) your reviews. In any case, you are a wonderful writer, and I am truly surprised that people waited until chapter 24 to review.
P.S.S. This is going to my favorites!
| ChasingProse chapter 23 . 5/21/2009
I hate worms, but this was hilarious.
| ChasingProse chapter 22 . 5/21/2009
Humorous angst? Interesting concept. Can't say I don't like it, but they deserve to be together.
| ChasingProse chapter 21 . 5/21/2009
Now, I can imagine Sakura doing that. :) Poor Kakashi, he got whipped.
| ChasingProse chapter 20 . 5/21/2009
So, he's injured? Typical banter. I love your characterizations of them.
| ChasingProse chapter 19 . 5/21/2009
Ah, both so obstinate. This one kept them rather in character. Je les aime.
| ChasingProse chapter 18 . 5/21/2009
So typical of him. Aloof, lazy Kakashi. Won't even take his clothes off. :)
| ChasingProse chapter 17 . 5/21/2009
Oh, this is sad. I really enjoyed it, though.
| ChasingProse chapter 16 . 5/21/2009
Ah, the complexity of love versus lust. Very well explored.
| ChasingProse chapter 15 . 5/21/2009
Ah, Adam and Eve. I'm not religious at all, but I find it very interesting the way you connected Naruto to the Bible. I like how he thinks about the consequences.
| ChasingProse chapter 14 . 5/21/2009
This one was beautiful. I like the metaphor of coffee.
| ChasingProse chapter 13 . 5/21/2009
The obligatory angst. This one is very good, and I like the passing mentions of what could have been.
| ChasingProse chapter 12 . 5/21/2009
This one put a smile on my face. Well-written.