|Reviews for Ten Commandments|
| sodakey chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Excellent story. Interaction, character voice - clear, visual, writing style - all of it. Nicely done.
| Michelle ASL chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Why is this rated M?
| Dixie Dewdrop chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Fantastic extension of the scene- I loved it!
| labyrinth38 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
This was... absolutely breathtakingly brilliant!
Very, very good writing; perfectly in-character; and very poetic, in a way...
Thanks so much for sharing this!
| cymraes chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
interesting use of words, I like the free associating, also the subtle/ unsubtle ending
| TheMalfoyLady chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
nice story and even nicer ending!
| Hromiko chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Ha, I just watched this episode tonight! I always wondered where Sharif from Sharif Returns came from. Anywho, I kind of think everyone needs hugs here; poor confused Abraham and Tony who's getting hit a bit hard by the comments and questions. Sometimes when people do father son stuff with Gibbs and Tony I find it painfully overemotional, but this is nicely understated while still pointing out the relationship they have. I really wish you had more NCIS stories, or some favorites I could go check out. You are a very good writer who seems to have a good grasp of the characters. Keep on writing!
| vanishingp2000 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Beautifully done, thank you very much, VP.
| NickTonyK chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Love it! Will you do more? Very good!
| Ann chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I liked it. Loved the ending.
| Song in the woods chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
That reads just like it is really them..including Tony's smile :) Good job!
| Mokibobolink chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Oh that ending was so great! What a nice little moment between Tony and Gibbs. Loved it.
| Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
So very nicely intertwined with the TV version. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
| MrsChaucersSquire chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Cute! Nice ending. Gibbs was very Gibbs-like.
| Le Bibliothecaire chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Wow, that was excellent! And it's a conversation and a scene that I'd never imagined. I loved "Abraham" in that episode and I've always wondered if he had any further interaction with the rest of the team and I've always wondered how Tony had read any more into Gibbs' referring to Tony as his son. Well done!