I'm glad she's staying with toshiro it would've been really awkward with momo but if she stayed with matsumoto (I think) it would have been hilarious!

I really love this story I wish you would finish it

Yikes! Toshiro's that clueless. I guess he really is dense. I feel you rangiku.

Dammit momo you're ruining hitsukarin.

You haven't updated in over a year! Please don't abandon this story!
It was getting to the best parts.
Also in the Manga Grimmjow, Nel, Riruka, and Yukia came back!
Update please. I'm been reading this all week and it's so good.
-AngelofDarkus

i dont like hinamori...

Next please! :3 I'm running out of good hitsukarin fabrics to read :(

Actually, souls CAN reproduce.

I know you're busy with real life stuff but if you've given up on this story at least tell your dedicated readers so they'll stop hoping and being disappointed. I reallly really love this story but if you have to leave it for your own reasons that's cool. Just please for the love of god let us know if you're ever gonna update again.

Please update. It's been over a year now. Please please please please please update.

I noticed that the Phoenix Zanpakuto represented Karin's hot headed and fiery personality which dichotomous with Hitsugaya's personality and Zanpakuto. That alone was great. Now my mind is utterly blown at the genius that is the symbolism of Phoenix and Dragon. Absolutely beautiful.

Loved the story! I think Karin and Toshiro make such a cute couple! I am glad that Hinamori is going back to her senses little by little, I was kind of feeling sorry for her, I couln't bring myself to hate her.

Whew... i binged through your fic in about... three days!? Should have been studying :u

I'll just say that i felt that the relationship bloom at the pond meditation scene with Karin and our favourite midget was a little sudden still; a slow relationship is far better than a sketchy one. However, it was far from shoddy, so good work there!

Its been fun reading your work; please update! i notice that you haven't updated in more than a year... i hope you're not dead (rude and blunt and strange as it sounds, an internet friend of mine died a couple months back... i only just learnt of it; apparently a hit and run, according to her IRL friends. so sad ;;)

This people out to kill them thing is a little strange... be careful how you go about it or else it may be cringeworthy as a plot!

I also hope to see how you show Karin's shikai and eventually, bankai. Perhaps have her phoenix around her similar to how shiro-chan has a tail, claws and stuff with his bankai? and six flames or so arrayed behind her like shiro's ice flowers? :p they'd be so cutely matching!

UPDATE SOON ONEGAISHIMASU!

plz update its 2015 already...

This is such a great story, and I am sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a while. You have done a great job keeping everybody true to character, and it has been a pleasure to read!