Reviews for Twilight of Dawn
HinaLuvLuvChan chapter 14 . 1/22/2011
I still hate Rosalie and Emmett. I almost feel like rooting for Death to take them, but then the Cullens might not like them anymore xp
Serpent91 chapter 14 . 1/22/2011
well written
BookwormBabe93 chapter 14 . 1/21/2011
Luv it except Ron wouldn't be the oldest Hermione would she was born in September '79 while Ron was born in March '80 :)
TheDarkestButterfly chapter 14 . 1/21/2011
I loooooove the way you write Harry and I absolutely adore your story! Please update soon it's hard to tbd such good stories like this one! :)
mithrilandtj chapter 14 . 1/21/2011
Then why isn't Teddy older if Remus died when Harry was 17?

Wouldn't Teddy be 10 instead?
Amaia-Sinblood chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
Awesome! I absolutely loved this chapter! I cannot wait for the next update! update soon please _
Mrmikezabini227 chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
nice twist there my friend! very nice indeed
Wolf Dragon Demon chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
You will definitely have to explain the immortality, unless you did and I don't remember. Well anyways keep up the good writing, truly enjoying it.
Basill chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
Out of everything I expected it was not that... Eeeeehhhh. *Squeels* Update asap plz!
princess moon shadow chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
Love it!
Ryle Culler chapter 14 . 1/20/2011
Well that hit you like a ton of bricks!
Basill chapter 13 . 1/10/2011
I hAVE ONLY READ THIS STORY A FEW THOUSAND TIMES AND IT GETS BETTER EVERY TIME. pLZ UPDATE ASAP!

Sorry, my caps got stuck and im too lazy to change it. Lol.
wolfpup0730 chapter 13 . 1/8/2011
loved it
eurogirl14 chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
good story, but i recommend a beta reader, or looking over more, since you keep switching tenses, na d its kind of annoying. otherwise, good plot!
Spennig chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
::pokes:: got the message, and am still up for helping beta n stuff, but you've got your messaging turned off. Can ya shoot me a PM with an email to send to or such?

Overall though what you sent looks good, minus minor spelling and grammar touchups.
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