Reviews for Twilight of Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I still hate Rosalie and Emmett. I almost feel like rooting for Death to take them, but then the Cullens might not like them anymore xp |
![]() ![]() ![]() well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luv it except Ron wouldn't be the oldest Hermione would she was born in September '79 while Ron was born in March '80 :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loooooove the way you write Harry and I absolutely adore your story! Please update soon it's hard to tbd such good stories like this one! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Then why isn't Teddy older if Remus died when Harry was 17? Wouldn't Teddy be 10 instead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I absolutely loved this chapter! I cannot wait for the next update! update soon please _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice twist there my friend! very nice indeed |
![]() ![]() ![]() You will definitely have to explain the immortality, unless you did and I don't remember. Well anyways keep up the good writing, truly enjoying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Out of everything I expected it was not that... Eeeeehhhh. *Squeels* Update asap plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that hit you like a ton of bricks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hAVE ONLY READ THIS STORY A FEW THOUSAND TIMES AND IT GETS BETTER EVERY TIME. pLZ UPDATE ASAP! Sorry, my caps got stuck and im too lazy to change it. Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, but i recommend a beta reader, or looking over more, since you keep switching tenses, na d its kind of annoying. otherwise, good plot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::pokes:: got the message, and am still up for helping beta n stuff, but you've got your messaging turned off. Can ya shoot me a PM with an email to send to or such? Overall though what you sent looks good, minus minor spelling and grammar touchups. |