| Reviews for Twilight of Dawn |
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   23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 3 . 12/21/2015 Erm how does Ed know they are dragon hide boots? He doesn't know about wizards and other magical creatures. Unless of course you change it up in the coming chapters. |
| ManyGamePlayer chapter 15 . 6/23/2015 I absolutely love what you are doing! This idea is great, and it was to my great pleasure that I read this! Hope to see more chapters soon! ;) |
| 134340 chapter 2 . 5/21/2015 Ooooh! Go Harry! |
| AkiraNatsume chapter 15 . 4/15/2015 So much drama. I love it, more chapters please. |
| huy chapter 15 . 12/21/2014 Please don't just use twilight as a setting but put things together into an equally parallel storyline. Things have become confusing and the harry potter characters have become so ooc while the twilight haven't. Just make some more balance please. BTW, you're a great writer so please don't take offense. Thanks |
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/21/2014 The story was going okay but later it just became outrages. You're a great writer, really. It's just that the latter parts of the story don't seem to jive with the previous chapters. In my personal view, could you tone down the godlike status of Harry and his gang? Try not to focus much on harry and just use the twilight part as setting and extra characters? Thanks. Anyway this is your story and I'm just a reader so it's your call in the end. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/28/2014 MOOREE! |
| Silver-Green Rain chapter 15 . 7/2/2014 I loved the story but it would be wonderful if you could finish it or give it to some one else to finish. |
| Skendo chapter 15 . 6/1/2014 Brilliant! More please! |
| tamashiyuki chapter 15 . 1/12/2014 Continue? Very good! I like so much! |
| DGfleetfox chapter 4 . 11/19/2013 Interesting story, I'm always up for a Harry crossover. However, those over dramatic statements of Harry's are a little too much, I'm all for a powerful Harry but it's making him too OOC and that takes away from believability... things like him saying, what was it... "fighting me will end your life" - it just makes this hard to read coz it doesn't strike as realistic to Harry's character. This is constructive criticism by the way so please don't be offended. Other than that it's pretty good : ) |
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 15 . 11/2/2013 Omfg! Awesome! |
| angelofheaven001 chapter 15 . 8/10/2013 loved upload. |
| Koizumi Scarlet chapter 15 . 7/15/2013 I loved it! I like that you didn't make the relationship between harry and co and the cullens the usual cliche relationship. I also like your version of what happened after the war. I look forward to the next chapter! You are an amazing writer!:) |
| Mashkai30 chapter 15 . 3/31/2013 Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! |