plz update soon.

love it n.n

write more

i loved loved was great.

This story is good, but the way you wrote it at the beginning before the 'immortal' chapter seems kinda skewed. I mean, Harry was just too happy when Teddy called Harry 'Dada' & Harry was too depressed in the beginning of the story. If he wanted to get away from it all, why take 10 years? And how could he put up with being depressed for 10 years? But also, you mentioned that right after he graduated Hogwarts he left to Forks-I don't get how 10 years could have passed then? O.o Very confused...I like the storyline but moving the Forks after graduation & moving to Forks after 10 years would have to be two different stories & Harry changed quite a bit in personality considering you changed the timeline of the story...

Is this it? Or are you still going to continue the story, If this is it I feel that it is lacking. I do agree with the slow romance thing, but to get to it and then have the story abruptly end is under-handed and low.. Great story though.

I completely agree with Venus. The small issue was unnecessarily escalated into a humongous one. Emmett only attacked Luna because they all felt deeply betrayed by Harry just as they had been with Bella. It was wrong but Draco fired an Incendio which would have ended Emmett's life. So in all I think it should have ended there. Both families are intensely protective of their members and I am sure Emmett would not have killed her, just hurt her but even then he knew the pack could protect themselves due to their wizarding powers.

I liked the fanfic in the beginning but it became too braggy for my taste after the chapter where Luna gets attacked. All this power-tripping and Harry showing off is a big turn off especially since he is so humble and modest in canon. Usually when provoked, he yells attacks and throws a hissy fit but then he is understanding and forgiving. Based on Harry's treatment of Dobby I never thought he would brag and put down someone who was inferior to him in power so that why the character change in Harry towards the end of this fanfic is disappointing and unwelcome.

I think the Pack should get over it instead of rubbing it in the Cullen's faces over and over again of how powerful they are. I loved the story up till that point but I stopped reading after this chapter...

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I love the halloween scene can't wait for the next chapter.

Would love to see an update for this :)

Ho. Ly. Cow. Intense! But I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please :)

Please update soon

Great story, please continue this.

is there more?

Really good chapter and major apologies for taking so long to review, keep up the good work and hope you update as soon as time and your brain permits.