Oh gosh...why is Edward sick... why was the pillow ripped and the window open...and where is the coat...? And surely Bella will remember that Mr. Miller mentioned Alice in the phone conversation?

Man. They are being *hunted.* I hope they find that out soon and officially meet Carlisle, Alice, Rosalie, and everyone else.

Oh my gosh! Bella comes face to face with James!

I favorited this story years ago and stopped reading it halfway through. I started reading again a couple of days ago and I'm so glad that you haven't given up on it!

I love that you're keeping the romance focused on Edward and Bella, not Jacob and Bella (so far), and I like how you've characterized Edward's background with him being human. I'm excited to see how Edward and Bella fare in this awesome fic! I wonder if they will stay human...

Looking forward to more updates!

McQuirk

I just finished reading and was wondering if there is a chance that you might still finish this story? I really hope you do because it is very intriguing.

Are you going to continue this story? It is amazing, i love the plot and everything. c:

i've lost all hope of this ever being updated...such a shame

Will this ever get finished?

I can't believe I started this and didn't realize it wasn't finished! I'm so bummed seeing that it's been 2 years since an update. It's a good story- very intriguing - and I need to know how it ends! I really hope you finish this, I need closure :-)

I can't believe it. It's been two years already... Please, finish it. Please?
Much love,
Ceci

It's been nearly two years, by my calculations. Are there going to be any more updates? I really love it so far.

I started reading this story when you first started posting. I've always wanted to see the end of this journey. I came back and reread it from the beginning again, and it's amazing to see the transformation in your writing over that time. I know it's been 2 years since your last update, and I feel your pain with so much going in life that u rarely have time for twitter, but I am hoping to see you finish this one day. Ill be here for the end whenever that comes.

Great chapter! Things are happening and questions abound!

So far we have gained very little from all the chapters so far. They are frustratingly the same: they're in love together, then Edward freaks out, then Bella takes him back. Over and over.

It's time something happens to really move the bigger story along. I'm really glad to see Alice interact, along with Emmett and Rose somewhat, even though it felt like a tease.

Anyway, I'm still reading.

This is my absolute favorite, long-term unfinished WIP. I love this story so much that if I ever received an update notice in my email, I'd have to go out and rent a bouncy house and a popcorn machine and clowns. And I'm (drumroll for cliche), AFRAID of clowns. It would be that worth it. I have no idea if you'll ever finish it, or what has kept you from it, but know that I'm not the only fan that would hire clowns if you ever come back to it. But thank you for the terrific chapters you did write.

Why does't Bella simply Google Edward? I would have long before.

I'm starting your story even though it isn't complete and it looks as though you aren't updating it lately. The first chapter is I enticing so I'm going to keep reading. :) hope you decide to update!