Reviews for The Woods are Lovely, Dark, and Deep
greengirl34 chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
Great description of Mr. Masen - I love the boxers and thin t-shirt and especially love the green eyes, I always wanted to see Edward with green eyes ever since Carlisle mentioned it in New Moon, thanks for fulfilling that wish! :)

I liked the Red Timber Lodge - Established in 1901 - nice touch!

Jessica AND Lauren - high school all over again! LOL!

I love all of your setting description - very detailed!

So, can Edward read minds even thought he isn't a vampire? I know in S.M.'s stories he mentions that they all carry special talents with them when they become vampires and they are intensified, so are you running with that? Just wondering!

Thank you!
cindysark chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
I love it so far and love the descriptiveness of it. I know you said you were worried about it as well as how long the chapters are but I think you are doing a great job and in my opinion, chapters can never be too long! Can't wait for more!
SimplyDazzling chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
This is story is incredible. Absolutely incredible- and it's new, so I'm totally excited for what's to come. It's so beautifully-written and well done, you have me completely hooked. I really love your writing style, and love what you've done with the plotline. Seriously though, the angst you've done so far is also beautifully done, and has just the perfect amount to make it fantastic. Oh, and I also love Darkward. xD

I really can't wait to see where this story goes, and for the next chapter. I hope you update really soon!~ Keep up the AMAZING writing(:

-Justine
ResoluteWriter1120 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Wow..

This is very well written!

And it's so good!

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Update as soon as you can!
sorcerergirl90 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
liked the chapter, but edwards an ass
sorcerergirl90 chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
awsome chapter! love it!
allvampedup chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
Wow... speechless! This is so good! By the way, I love Charlie and Renée semi-getting-back-together. Okay, I'm guessing the banging-psychotic-ghost-moaning-panting-neighbour is Edward, but, who knows? You might be throwing a curve ball! Why is he so tormented? Poor Edward. You're really great, the suspense is killing me over here! Keep up the good work :)
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
more!
xcrazyangelx1800 chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
i love it pls update soon
yum.frozen.grapes chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
Thus far I have to say that I enjoy this story, it seems really interesting to me, I don't know what it is but I find myself wanting to read more. I can't wait until Edward and Bella meet I have a feeling that that will be a great moment.
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