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Daijusan Ferikkusu chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
What, no sequel? Heh. Had fun reading the author's notes, but not as much fun as imagining their argument and fight scene, and Juri's smug smile. But I must say, you need work on your dialogues, there were times when I don't believe the lines that they were saying. Like I couldn't imagine them saying that.
LupineLover chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
OMG this was awesome!
Digital Dive chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Since nobody has reviewed yet I'm happy to be the first, your story isn't bad, it just needs some spellcheck and thought put into what happens. Not that I'm saying it's bad or anything, just that I think it should have more of a build-up.

Anyways I'm almost ready to put some more work of my own up, just have to finish this beta-reading thing with CrazyEight... speaking of which gotta run and hope you get lots of reply's.
ReimeiOokami chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Nice work.

I would like to point out 2 things.

1. When you put dolls and make-up and clothes, it should of been dolls, make-up and clothes.

2. It wasn't that cliche.

~flixemon~