Reviews for Attraction
RockerLover chapter 7 . 12/5/2014
Great writing. Always loved these books. Very cute grouping of sexy stories :)
SyireeneTheEvilGurlGenuz chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
I love these drabbles, especially the sequel you made! it sound like what my friends and I do *except without all the alcohol!) I hope you continue, I would love to see more!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/23/2012
more more more.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/23/2012
i actually fell of the chair i was sitting on from laughter.
jmarrero16 chapter 7 . 11/18/2011
I agree there is nothing to steamy and maybe you should add a thing where an ambassador make advances at one of them and the other comes to stake the claim and later it gets hot and steamy
Shay Hitomi chapter 7 . 5/15/2011
yay and i have A Fish All E become a crazed fan since i have wrote meaning less comments on all storys and at the same time ran out of chapters*pouts uses puppy dog eyes* YOU WILL WRITE MORE okay so random new person idea it would be funny if someone had envented rolerskates and Numair and Daine maybe a drunk Alanna George Buri Even the royals went rollerskating anyways i will finish with my usaual denial

Me: Im a Girl Woman Female whateverrr is Shay real a boy name i personal thought it was a unisex

Dad: its a boy name Shay

Me: geee thanks dad*mumbles naughty words* besides my real names Seamus why is that a boy name to*snickers to self* no anwser huh thats what i thought
Shay Hitomi chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
heres a little song i wrote you might want to sing it to ooow oow dont worry be happy dont worry be happy know...corrupted everyones corrupted any way i am going to try to be serious this time (anyway the song was that you should be happy you are corrupted or some nonsence that POPed its way in my head) that was that*hmm* whats the word detailed no ummm graphic yes thats it yay *fistpumps buoghts of uncontrlable cheers* okay got the cheer thing from a Toyata comerail
Shay Hitomi chapter 5 . 5/14/2011
*hiccup* HEY LARRY IOUS *hiccup* drunk people*sigh* reminds me of raquel

*looks around crazily then runs away*
Shay Hitomi chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
"A log bit me" *snickers evily* Numair wants to bite you. in many of your more secrite places *evil laugh and lightning*

okay well my mind went blank an the came up sooo...*turns and runs away*
Shay Hitomi chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
*hmpf* my last review sounded nerdy but people yell at me cause im me so in my language this is what i ment to say

*tries to conrol uncontrolable laughter* Ahahaha ooo ahahahaha *giggle* *cough* *hiccup* *laughter* Ouch my side, suddenly remembers story. *starts to laugh uncontrolable* Suddenly mom walks in looks at daughter on floor(half Dolphinhalf OtterDaughter) gets a "we need to call a doctor that takes care of the mentaly insane" quitly backs out of room slowly. i in the mean time laugh harder because of that. OK so at breakfast the next morning i swear she was glanceing at me with weird looks i glance back and pull my plate of bakon closer to me*nother weird look*and suure enoth (Drum role please)i get out of school early and is taken to a dotcor wich i know hate becuase i sit and do nothing and suddenly doctor starts to write feriously *raise my eyebrow* writes feriously *give him my best what the BEEP is wrong With you look* writes feriously.

so yah...um.. the verry long review was about as long as the chapter and I blame you for me haveing a messed up mind but *gets unexitabley happy* i blame Dr. Butt face too (i known kidish name*sighs and nods head in shame*) anyway i have said evety thing so now my words of wisdom *coughs to get attention*

"When all else fails break out the instruction manual"

Shay
Shay Hitomi chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Ahahahahahaha to Ur story and the thinger for the minors (ugh hate when people's give things names i mean whats the point?) but U never told them to keep a tab up to switch 2, the the new window other wise the start bar thinger(there we go agian) say what U read and sometimes the title say to muuuch. anyway great story.
baddy abby chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
i read all 7 chapters and i like
NomNomGirl chapter 7 . 2/4/2011
As others have said, I like the fact that you can write naughty stories with out being... well... gross. Each of your chapters feels very real and deliciously awkward :). I like that not all your chapters contain sex, but they all contain a little of Numair's glorious yumminess. Keep writing! Your writing style is very good btw. It's nice to read stories where the writer is obviously not 12 _(). Don't stop wriiiiiiiting! /pout
TheLadySongSerenade chapter 7 . 9/27/2010
So, tell me- when is "sometime"?
TheLadySongSerenade chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
... sigh... - I love these one shots! D
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