Reviews for Fighting, Falling, Rising
cv chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
sorry but it was kind of a miss but nice try, by the way not all poems have to be all mysterious and stuff, just let how jace feeled flow through your mind. i t will turn out a lot better. i my friend said it was cool :D
elliana chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I like. I hate poetry with way to flowerly language or just to impress...this was really simple but it got the point across. good work.
feisty.red.head chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
OH MY GOD HUNNY! This is so great!

I REALLY love this!
writer'sblock7777 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Wow, I don't normally read poems, but this one is really good. You can feel it.
LikeNoOneElse chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I loved it. GReat job.
xjpants chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
It's beautiful. So simple, yet it captures the thoughts and emotions perfectly... it's a little sad too, but fitting. I love it.
livindncngdream chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
WOW this was a really good poem. Poetry isn't my favorite thing to read but this was excellent!