Reviews for Blurred Lines
IHateYourOC chapter 1 . 6/30
Why did you have Harry mention Bob? Harry has said many times that the Wardens could not find out about Bob or they would kill Harry. Remember? Bob was Kemmlers, and the Wardens want to annihilate anything that was his. The fact that Bob "had" knowledge of the Darkhallow is a death sentence for Harry.
KINGREADER chapter 15 . 12/12/2012
love it
Archmagelite2000yrs chapter 7 . 11/15/2011
Dude, you killed jasper? wtf

a newb warden killed a 160yr old highly trained vampire IN PHYSICAL COMBAT?
Josh chapter 32 . 1/12/2011
sequel
Karrin Blue chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Right...Harry isn't nineteen, he's somewhere in his 30s. He didn't want o be come a warden, he was forced by circumstances (dead beat, i think). YOu don't have to be a warden to be a "right and true wizard" , sort of how you don't need to be a police officer to be a memeber of the US government. Also, harry is REALLY ooc
josh100o chapter 32 . 10/15/2010
We want a sequel. greaat story
tom chapter 32 . 6/22/2010
wow just wow really liked it
dismalstone chapter 32 . 2/2/2010
I like this story. I'm a huge fan of the dresden files, twilight not so much. but you somehow wrote it in a way that entertained both sides. I do hope you'll continue in some way. However i have to ask when did arron become harry's apprentice and did he participate in the battles that harry had to face in the series?
Stormin Mormon chapter 32 . 7/29/2009
Ha! Suspicion (and an embarassing knowledge of vampiric lore) wins in the end! It was a very good story; you seem to be able to delve into subjects I wouldn't even think of. I should work on Death Mark as a feeble payment.
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 32 . 7/28/2009
You finished on my birthday. Cool! And Alice is back! I can die happily and not so pouty. (I've been rather pouty since I read chapter 31. Thanks so much! :D

Jocelyn
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 31 . 7/28/2009
Are you fucking serious? REALLY? GOD, you suck! (but not really) I'm so pissed right now. Why! *sob* Man, I was a bitch to write Bella's. Didn't see it coming...

Jocelyn
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 30 . 7/28/2009
Alice naked on the hood of the Porsche...what were /you/ thinking, sir? :P

Jocelyn
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 29 . 7/28/2009
/Every inch of her, it seemed, was amazingly sweat./

Sweat, lol. Funny. This was a sweet chapter. I like that you pointed out Alice's practical need for dominance. So true, you know? :P

Jocelyn
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 28 . 7/28/2009
I was so confused for the first half haha, but I liked it so I kept reading. And then you went back to unhappiness! :( But it got happy again so I'm okay :P

Jocelyn
Jocelyn Torrent chapter 27 . 7/28/2009
O.O

no time for a proper review. I gotta see what happens!

Jocelyn
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