Reviews for It Wasn't Your Fault
DragonEye0905 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Ahrg, FINALLY! A Dark Link and Link fic that isn't yaoi! Yeah, that pairing makes no sense...

I have never thought that way about Dark before, as he usually kills me a few times, and that irritates me. But the scream, yes I noticed the human sound. Very nice, and well done. :D
Manicies chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Hello! First off, I read this story and I thought it was WONDERFUL. It's so REFRESHING to find a Dark LInk fanfic that isn't yaoi.

Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against Yaoi. But the thought that the Dark Link fanbase is mostly yaoi depresses me.

Anyways, I just wanted to say that I really love stories that perrsonify DL, and I have been planning to write one of my own very soon. Thanks for writing this!
sonryz chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
:O Awesome stuff! Just wanted to say that I'm really glad this WASN'T yaoi, personally I'm sick of all the pairing in LoZ so I'm happy that this was written and I managed to find it. :) Love the ideas behind this fic - Dark Link being human, his defeat resulting in spoils like that of just another monster, the fact that a character that would really have had such an impact on Link to defeat rewarded him with nothing more significant than an 'upgrade'... I never thought of things like this before, so it was really interesting for me to read about, and you conveyed them to me really well. Thanks for sharing!

evol krad chapter 1 . 8/25/2010

this would be great if you keept going with it.
AmarantineOct.3'11 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
That scream...I can tell why you had nightmares. (
Death-Note-Zelda-Kitty chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That was really good i loved sad :( anyway i hate yoai yes i said it it is disturbing especially when its two people that arent like that! Link is not like that and neither is dark link so awesome job on making a non-yaoi story i give you cookies!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
...well you lost the bet P

I am not a yaoi fan, just like you!

Im also a major Zelink fan x3

just finished readin' most of your stories...

I like everything I read!

gonna spend some time later to send a review to each story I've read...

then PM you for a proper introduction...


yes, like this story a lot...

I'd get nightmares too if I ever get the chance to play OoT...

so, yeah...

I'll review the stories I liked later...

'till then!

-Z (razorsfire)
Alyssa- Ruler of the Free Word chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
My...My god! I never thought about dark's scream before! I'm not very observant so i didn't catch it...This reminds me...I should probably get back to my Dark Link story! I honestly belive that dark should have his own game. he is probably the greatest zelda villain of all time! (aside from vaati that is. he will always be my fave!) i love Dark Link. he is awesome...Always will be! 0 woot!
destinykeyblade chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Oh, finally! Someone else who hates all the yaoi! You get a big round of applause from me! And I know what you mean; that scream haunts you after you hear it!
Wavebreeze chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
This one shot was very well written and I couldn't find anything wrong about it! The emotions were perfect and the reader could easily sense how Link was feeling, the horror and guilt clouding his mind. But I wish to challenge you, and so here I go.

When Link casts Din's fire, does this wave of heat come rushing at him? Does it remind him of the volcano and, for a split second, he feels like he himself will catch on fire until the wall of fire flees away from him. Or maybe he can't feel it due to magic. But, as he watches Dark catch on fire, maybe he remembers the heat of the flames from the volcano and how he didn't wish for anybody, human or not, to have to suffer through the horror and pain.

Also (just me being picky here), after Dark catches on fire and he speaks, maybe you could just quickly say how his voice is. Is it hoarse? Relaxed because he thinks all of his suffering is done? Or something else?

I'm just challenging you here, I truly think that this is a great story. Keep up the good work!

Moonlight-Zelda chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Poor Shadow-kun ... *huggles him*

Sorry about not reviewing until now, I thought the last one had gone through. But this is still a very nice oneshot - You make it very realistic.
PlaguedByEarth chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Now that you mention it, I did feel something similar to the way you did when he screamed, I just didn't think about it too hard. Yes, I took the rupees, though. Very realistic, honored the story, and I'm impressed that you were able to draw on something so many people didn't notice or realize.

By the way, Link and Dark Link are pretty much the same person, so a pairing between them is even wierder to me. It's not yaoi, it's masturbation.
Player4 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Neat fic ) Yeah, that scream is pretty creepy -shudder-
Gwenivere River chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
I went to find a video (since my game is in another state) so I could see. XD And wow no kidding! He sounds human! This story was VERY good!

Keep up the good work! D
Canada Cowboy chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
I'm on lunch break right now, so I'll keep it brief and hurry before I'm late for class. Here's what I got.

So is this the DL situation you were describing to me the other night? The one where you said Dark sounded so human that it scared you? If that inspiration is what drove you to this fic, then I say it was pretty well done.

Personally, the "seeing insde their eyes" things was very well described here. Because of Dark's situation as a created monster one might not expect emotions, but I guess you basically disagreed and did a pretty good job countering it there. I personally would add more into this part, and go into what Link really thinks about his dark counterpart rather than say he feels for him. This is like a dark twin, so what's Link going to think? Given that they're two halves of a whole (figuratively), what does that mean? And what will happen once Dark says "It wasn't your fault?" Does that mean he'll become a part of Link again? You could add so many factors into there, so I'm not satisfied with just a "I feel bad" situation.

Other than that, I quite like it. Make sure you keep it up though, and good lukc on finishing BTT.
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