Reviews for Ah! Naruto!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2020
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Ryu wolf chapter 8 . 3/18/2020
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ShadowRealmComics chapter 8 . 12/21/2019
Funny chapter and I love what you did to Orochimaru. I still want to know about those with the curse seals though, from the manga he was able to come back from death due to them and Kabuto is still alive at the moment, so I cannot wait to see how you deal with this.
shadeslayer15 chapter 8 . 2/8/2019
a great story.
Monster King chapter 8 . 11/17/2018
Great work I hope you have not given up on it
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
NaruHina? Cool!

Tora the Hellcat? Awesome!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/5/2018
This story started good but got bad by this chapter.
Shinobi Gatana chapter 6 . 6/20/2017
Kind of loving this story. Wave arc was short and sweet. It worked well.
Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
If this story is not completed... your Naruto/Oh My Goddess nerd card is revoked!
Guest chapter 8 . 5/28/2017
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Guest chapter 8 . 3/27/2017
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SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 2/28/2017
Welp I'm going to have to cut my loses. You started this off pretty strong but I feel like it just deteriorated. Info is contradictory, a made up character is given more scenes and focus than the real main characters this was implied to be focused on, Naruto's healing over the abuse he suffered by the villagers and growing accustomed to people liking him and wanting to be family is rushed through and glossed over if not ignored, and Urd's handling of raising a child is skipped completely with more and more characters coming out the woodwork to cause chaos and attempt to steal the spotlight while having no real perceived bearing to the story than just being there for convenience. I still don't like Nox, and even feel unsympathetic to his supposed trauma. Call me cold but I tend to be critical of fictional characters and as far as I've understood from what is written so far he's an unapologetic ass with no redeeming qualities (other than his connections) who's DNA could have actually caused problems with his baby momma resulting in her miscarriage. He is a half breed but leans more heavily on his evil demon side. Without a full understanding of all details concerning this issue and the involved parties he's bothered by I can't determine if his nightmare is simply an overreaction to what actually happened or if his baby momma is simply crazy as hell. Regardless I don't actually care to know. This story wasn't what I was expecting or hoping but best of luck with your writing.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
Nox is a little shit. I can appreciate you trying to give him depth and a past but he simply comes off as an over emotional, hypocritical, ridiculously illogical jackass with issues. I don't know how old Megumi is but it's implied she's much younger than Nox and Naruto is only fucking 5 years old so his treatment of them due to not just their younger age but their station as his family makes him seem even more pathetic with how he treats them. Only his magic and physical appearance has been affected and even then the magic problem is just temporary. He knows nothing of Naruto and Naruto is new to all of this and despite briefly explaining a bit to him he expects a five year old to understand everything even things he hasn't explained with clarity. Then has the nerve to claim that God wouldn't blame him for killing infants, infants that are more closely to being his grandkids than most others most likely, for talking amongst themselves about a topic Nox doesn't like because one of them is still confused as to why Nox is such a pussy ass whiny bitch. The fact that he repeatedly gets off free when he's entirely too disrespectful to his elders and superiors and picking fights with those same people's kids is astounding. He's a grown ass man despite being deaged and gender flipped and has retained all his knowledge he should be more mature than he is. Instead he's simply unlikeable. His so called struggle with his halves has nothing to do with it. So personally I don't really care to know about his past. He doesn't deserve such focus when this story shouldn't even be about him. It won't excuse his horrible treatment to 5 year olds or his disrespectful disposition to those who have been helpful and lenient to him.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Broooooooo I saw this and immediately had to give it a read! Mistress Urd always had a thing for dishing out punishment to those deserving and how screwed would everyone be when Naruto has this particular goddess in his corner? My expectations are somewhat high lol.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/6/2017
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