Reviews for Obsidian Sky
sarahmicaela88 chapter 15 . 12/16/2016
Ummm why are they waiting for sex? People plan their first times like crazy. And a lot of times it brings expectations that arent met and just end up being disappointed.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 14 . 12/16/2016
He forgave her too easily. It suxs that she uses Jake like her own emtional punching bag for her pleasure. And that the poor boy takes it just because he loves her so much.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 12 . 12/16/2016
Ok why did Seth phase so quick? Why not Quil and Embry first? And where are Paul and Jared? Why is she being like this?
sarahmicaela88 chapter 8 . 12/16/2016
The girl doesnt knw what she wants.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 5 . 12/15/2016
And what is it that he believes?
sarahmicaela88 chapter 4 . 12/15/2016
Umm how could Jake make this better?
sarahmicaela88 chapter 3 . 12/15/2016
Ok so her first kinky dream. Who cares people have them all the time. Does she not knw about the wolves here or no?
sarahmicaela88 chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
Ok why is this girl such a sarcastic bitch? Any sane person super natural or mortal that would have witnessed her little cliff jumping attempt would have placed her in a psych ward and put her on antipsychotics. This girl needed help from a medical professional.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
Why would that still hurt her? I thought she got passed it?
Guest chapter 18 . 8/26/2014
just found this story and loved it! thanks for writing this lovely jacob and bella story
snow eopard chapter 18 . 11/4/2013
I have to say i absolutely loved this and you are a bloody amazing writer,
please keep writing,
here is a suggestion,one where bella phases,when Edward leaves,imprints on Jake or something, or possibly one where Jacob and bella,as per usual are e best friends and she is in love with him but he doesn't know a d he shacks up with the rez slut eventually they will get-together.
it was originally one idea i had for my stories but i am busy with some of my others
yea so...
love snow
Guest chapter 18 . 5/15/2013
That was good.
bvbblez chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
you so copied that marriage proposal off of that movie stepmom haha good 1 awesome story
SagaDevotee chapter 17 . 4/25/2012
PERFECT. Loved it. Loved every word of it.
SagaDevotee chapter 16 . 4/25/2012
SCARY & wonderful. wonderful wonderful wonderful.
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