Reviews for Kite
thegirlwiththesunshine chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
that was so good! please continue!
thegirlwiththesunshine chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
that was so good! please continue!
Togira Ikonka chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
wow. this is really really good!

it really feels so far like a kenneth oppel book. your style differs from him but the plot seems very solid so far. )

the only thing that i really am going to suggest is maybe more description of his surroundings and perhaps where and why he is where he in life.

does that make sense?
the LIME-GREEN color chapter 3 . 5/5/2009
You've got me hooked. I want to know what happens next!

Just one small thing, um, when you have dialogue you put it like, for example,

"Oh, I'll do more than lay a finger on her" he chuckled

You want to put a comma after her, like,

"...finger on her," he chuckled.

But honestly don't worry about it. I make my fair share of grammar mistakes. (Once I wrote "I now" instead of "I know".) Just trying to help some.

Mhmm... I wonder if we will find out what the title means... Kite...Mhmm...

Great job, though. Excellent! Keep updating, though!
kate4evermatt chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
wow that was really intresting. lol ur really good at leaving cliff hangers. please update soon cant wait
GodlyFan227 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
kate4evermatt chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
this really intrested me...u should keeping going...ill be happy to read it
justlooseit00 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
yay another skybreaker story :)

the chapter was very realistic although i thought that matt was just a tad ooc (i don't think he would get lost in the park, hes a smart character)

but other than that great start

and wow what a cliffy lol

write up the next chapter quick or the cookie monsters gonna eat you o_O