Reviews for The Alien from the Blue Lagoon |
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![]() ![]() 7? |
![]() ![]() please tell me this isnt the end i swear to god please |
![]() ![]() Damb Ben you really were pissed off. though i feel wrong for shipping them since there cousins i gotta say Ben was BADASS in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Language |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAIT WAIT WAIT JUST A MINUTE, WHY didn't Ben go to the Omnitrix, HE ALWAYS goes for the Omnitrix, even in a situation like this. |
![]() ![]() Pleae continue! I really love this story, it is really well paced. I love your writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleeeeeeeeease update! |
![]() ![]() You're are going to have to cut back on putting authors notes in the middle of your chapters it takes your readers out of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Is very very good story congratulation I hope you will continue this can't wait for next chapter Bwen Forever |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed it it is perfect I cant wait until you write the next chapter I love bwen! |
![]() ![]() New chap must have it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this so far. I can't wait to read wait happens next. |