Reviews for Our Great Divide
Proluna chapter 9 . 6/17/2009
Wow is all I can say to this. Usually it takes a lot for me to really feel emotional about a story, and this one was amazingly written. You're writing is beautiful and keep it up!
Daryl Ann chapter 9 . 4/29/2009
I liked the Biro bits in this last chapter...and how Carson describes her as 'intense, I know'.(heh,heh...) Also I liked Rodney's explanation that Radek would want the treatment because he's a scientist like him. Thanks for a story with an interesting plot and that was not overwhelming in length like some are. I tend to shy away from '34 chapters and counting' fics! Have you started another? :o) DA
Daryl Ann chapter 8 . 4/28/2009
Still with ya! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :o) DA
Daryl Ann chapter 7 . 4/25/2009
A very intense and emotional chapter. What did Rodney do? I think Carson is in for a surprise as he turns off that heart monitor. You have a talent for story telling and as always I look forward to more. :o) DA
Mercury's Winter chapter 6 . 4/25/2009
Poor Radek :( Love it so far! Great job capturing Rodney! More please!
bhemmen chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
Daryl Ann chapter 6 . 4/24/2009
Another great chapter, although the suspense is killing me! What will they do now? Maybe take the risk and do the treatment anyway(?)Or maybe something entirely different. It's driving me crazy that Rodney didn't go in to see poor Radek. As you can see, this story is really holding my interest. Thanks for writing, I look forward to the next chapter! :o) DA
cimmer chapter 5 . 4/22/2009
Wow you've got my interest. I was interested before because I like Radek and I love Radek/Rodney sparring matches. I like that Ronan is fond of him and the reference to the "B" team. (I'm also a big Lorne fan and frankly the Atlantis B team could easily be anyone elses' A team.)

I like the medical mystery. I almost thought the bacteria had made the cells Wraith-like or zombie like; the cells look dead but aren't and continue to feed on living cells but apparently not. This idea to use Wraith cells to defeat the disease is fascinating. Can't wait to see how that works out.
Daryl Ann chapter 5 . 4/22/2009
I liked the twist in the plot in this chapter. I thought..."so, that's what they'll do for the cure...stem cells.", then it didn't work, and now the wraith cell idea! The suspense is building as DR. Z's condition gets worse. This story has me hooked...gotta see where it's headed. GREAT STORY TELLING! Thanks for writing, :o)DA
tracy chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
This is well-written, and the character voices are right on. I'm very surprised there aren't more reviews for a story this good.
Daryl Ann chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
I LOVE THIS STORY! It has interesting plot and great whump of one of one of my favorite characters. Also I like Rodney's frustration and the Radek POV(very cool that he can't seem to understand English). It's hard to believe this is a first story. I see in your profile you have more ideas, I will definitely add you to my author alerts! You and your beta friend are doing a great job! :o)DA
Daryl Ann chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Great chapter! Poor Radek...I can't wait to see where this story goes. Thanks for the fast updates!
Daryl Ann chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
Nope, not your average flu...I think maybe it's something he caught from the birds' nest (or maybe 'bird cooties' bit him as well as the mosquito thingies). Glad to see Carson and Keller both in your story. I look forward to Rodney's reaction to Radeks's deteriorating condition. UPDATE SOON! :o) DA
Eplen91 chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
Jeg synes at engelsken din er bra! ;)

Gleder meg til å lese mer. Det er litt deilig å skrive på norsk! ;) Jeg begynte å lure på om jeg var den eneste norske på denne siden! :P

Keep up the good work!
Daryl Ann chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Please write more! I like Zelenka stories! (Don't worry about your English, you're doing just fine). :o) DA