|Reviews for Thomas Adventure story part 2 Pokemon battling|
| The Conquerors chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Okay I don't know if you are aware of this but... your chapters are god damn walls of texts. Spaces and paragraphs don't cost anything to produce so please be aware that you can use them. Besides that not a bad story.
| Satoshi Tajiri12 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Listen to the words of Satoshi Tajiri, PUT IN THE ANNOYING ORANGE! "Pokémon? I'm not a pokémon, I'm an orange! Hey! Hey person! Why do you have a mouse that says pikachu? It's kinda shocking. nywhahahahahahaha!" lol
| Omnitrix1 chapter 6 . 7/8/2010
Nice fights, and you got more help from FictionPress, huh? Well, I liked Macy's battles, and I can't wait to see more battles.
| Omnitrix1 chapter 4 . 3/2/2010
Me(singing good:) Oh, what you say, ooh, but you only been way. Ooh, what you say, And it's all for the best!
Tonto: Sorry. He had that song that song stuck in his head all day. Anyways, the battles were good. I actually Seras actually knew how to Pokemon battle. I just wanted to see explosions. Unless you've seen them one too many times, then they get annoying. Very annoying.
Me(done singing:) So anyways, has the review started already?
Tonto: He's done singing. I've got to turn this hing off!
TRANSMISSION CUT OFF