|Reviews for Life's Little Luxuries|
| videodrome chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I liked it. Omg... he rejects her because she's too much like Marishka? That's just priceless.
I like how you managed to keep Drac very IC.
All in all, wonderfull job.
| TigerInWhite chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
haha he REJECTS HER! THATS FLIPPIN AWESOME!
| pheobep3 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
It was awasome,by the way you can turn this into a series.
| BritishPixie chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I like! You should write some more Van Helsing Dracula stuff. It's very good.
| Valeska Vampire Queen chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I really love this oneshot - I don't often see oneshots written from Dracula's POV that are of this calibre, you certainly have his character down well - too many people let him slip OOC when they write from his perspective but you've avoided that wonderfully.
One tiny little nitpick though, you tend to use a full stop after you use dialogue - for example;
“There’s so much I haven’t done. I’m so….young.” she finished feebly.
The full stop after 'young' should be replaced with a comma because 'she finished feebly' is technically part of the same sentence...this tutorial by Maiafay helped me because I used to find dialogue tags really confusing.
: / / w w w . / 4 0 6 05 / / 1 /
(remove the spaces as I'm not too sure if the site will filter out URLs in reviews)
Apart from that this is a highly enjoyable work and I really hope that you continue it, if not, I'll be looking out for anything else from you.