Reviews for Riches to Rags
Lion8520 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I had a feeling it was Numair, but I was so happy it was! Gah! And I love the title, the way you turned that around. :D keep writing, I love it. 10/10!
i chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Good, if a little short!

Keep going with this - there's a lot of potentional.

There might be one minor plot flaw - you said, "rags his friends had given him," and then, "tomorrow there would be no traceof he was."

Maybe it's just my imagination running wild, but wouldn't it be possible to find Arram through his friend? I can't really explain that better.

Just a thought for some consideration. :)

BlueSkiesFanatic chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
WOW. It left me breathless. Why is Numy (I love Aly's nickname for him) scared? why is he going into hiding? Love your name, by the way.


*To the cunfused author, 'BURNT APPLESAUCE!' is my new way of saying " Wow. Superb. Amazing. Great job. Keep writing. " AND "Toodles! " All at once.

Share the love. Share the applesauce.
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Good job! I liked this one, good description, and an interesting part of his flight to capture.