Reviews for Naruto: The Half Of One Self
StrongGuy159 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Awesome chapter continue please.
hellfire45 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
make more chapters it was good and for a first lemon it was good
JD Fanficing chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Manga154 chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Yosh! This is amazing! I like how you have the one try to kill him right off the bat. Killjoy, great first try at a lemon. Now when will the little monkey girl come in and start blowing stuff up?
alone shadow dream chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
great chap i hope you do a Tsuruko lemon next chap. one thing that bothers me is where the hell is su at? a hope to see another chap so please continue the story and not leave it (puppydog-eye no jutsu)
shyguy1818 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
WayDrifter chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Nice very nice. please make a naruto/tsuruko lemon next. Please hurry up with next chapter
Blackfang1983 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
sweet story
The Elemental Dragon Emperor chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I hope you update soon its very good and i like to read more
Challenger chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Nice way to start.
the DragonBard chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Sorry, but this isn't that good.

You called him Naruto, but there's nothing about him that's Naruto but the name. You do too much telling, and not enough showing. You reveal things much too quickly, which is out of character for... just about anyone really.
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Like always awesome.