Reviews for Death's Sweet Touch
blb1000 chapter 20 . 8/31/2013
It was tough reading through each of their breakups & claiming they didn't wasn't the other. B was quite hurtful after her change. I'm breathing a sigh of relief at the end.
blb1000 chapter 19 . 8/31/2013
Not sure the while Aro plan was necessary to the story. It didn't really make much sense.
blb1000 chapter 16 . 8/31/2013
Jeez, so many twists & turns. It's a little over whelming.
blb1000 chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
Until Alice mentioned vamps & werewolves in B's bedroom (in FL or AZ?), B didn't know they were vamps so the Volturi would have no reason to threaten her.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
Is B in Florida (last chapter) or Arizona (this chapter)? I see what Alice is doing to get Ed to come back.
blb1000 chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
Wonder if Alice saw her writing that note?
blb1000 chapter 9 . 8/31/2013
I don't think I will ever enjoy Edward being hurt.
blb1000 chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
I'm not liking Jake or Charlie much at this point.
blb1000 chapter 6 . 8/31/2013
Not looking good for Ed as Charlie has forbidden her from seeing him.
blb1000 chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
I'm betting Charlie didn't invite Mike.
blb1000 chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
Alice touched here. Why can't he?
blb1000 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I always enjoy each authors spin on the original.
caww chapter 20 . 5/4/2010
cute
and that the veggie vampire world would get bigger...uhmn will that change the circle of life having more predators to the animal kingdom?
caww
caww chapter 19 . 5/3/2010
I'm glad I finally caught up to this chapter.
I'm so glad the wolves went after Aro, the others, and the guard.
That they chose to fight and it wasn't Bella's mind control too.
What a relief Jacob got rescued, that Bella wouldn't leave Jacob! That has got to change Sam and the other's opinion of Bella and the Cullen's?
I'm so glad, well to me that the wolves will have a great time telling their war stories.
I really liked this chapter..it's just amazing.
I did wonder how Aro could watch and wait like that about Edward and Bella that way..did his brothers know he was watching them that way?
Thank goodness Bella didn't listen after all to Alice.
It was wonderful to read how Bella felt about Edward and his reactions.
caww
Miss West chapter 20 . 4/11/2010
Beautifully written but it could use some touch ups. Keep up the good work!
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