|Reviews for May I Use You?|
| snailhunter23 chapter 21 . 11/13/2013
this story was incredible
| Gold Testament chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
I'm still a major fan of this story and Odd Affection.
| Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
17 is way too OOC
| Nathanel chapter 21 . 7/13/2012
"Even if the people of this planet don't forgive you, we can always go to namek and use the dragonballs there to help out."
Less than 2 seconds of reading, later:
Now he was gone, and without any dragonballs, there was no way to bring him back.
| 61394 chapter 17 . 3/8/2012
17 went over the deep end i love it
| Vegito Jr 113 chapter 21 . 2/26/2012
I love the story :3 couple minor issues here and there, lot of repeating dialogue in the plot but it was really good. And the character development was great too keep it up :p
| Oghma Infinium chapter 6 . 12/12/2011
Ha ha, sucks to be you Babidi!
| Gohanroxme chapter 21 . 6/22/2011
Awesome story, dude! I love the plot and stuff. So captivating. Its a really nice fic. Good title, too, lol.
| SSJ04 Mewtwo chapter 21 . 8/6/2010
This was a good story. Don't feel too bad about 17, he forgot the first rule about dealing with sayians...,don't mess with a sayian's mate.
| DemonLord17 chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
I could easily eat him, but I'm not so sure about Eighteen. I wonder how well she'll do.
I am hoping that it was a mistake anyway awesome story!
| xWei chapter 21 . 4/26/2010
| saiyan prince1 chapter 21 . 4/11/2010
well this went well. i like the entire story. perhaps you could write one last chapter to see how the wishes went and perhaps getting rid of cell. well anyways great job with everthing
| Engelmohr2004 chapter 6 . 2/19/2010
well I guess thats a good reason as any for why majin buu did'nt appear in the future saga lol babi finished by the finish buster a fitting end lol xd thought it would be a excellent twist if buu got released
| Engelmohr2004 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
hes probably not getting stronger because the life energy on the earth has waned with the androids destruction and life energy is he source of the z fighters power
| Xadro chapter 21 . 10/29/2009
God all that talk about forgiveness is making me sick why do they have to be so fucking goody goody its seriously insane that they are willing to forgive and forget, insane i tell you! But i guess the situation solved it self, talk about convenient D
People were actually hoping 17 became good? Are the bloody insane, god the guy tried to force himself on his sister, im glad he's dead i just wanted Gohan to do it instead of him taking the cowards way out (not that he intented to)
I still think the story ended too happily ever after.
I can honestly say i love the Gohan/18 ship the most but i wouldnt have minded if one or both of them would have died, or perhaps ended up hating each other for whatever reason, you stories tend to always end with a happy ending and while i can understand that 18 and 17 are forgiven in the normal time-line, here in the Mirai time-line its insane that 18 is forgiven so easily, again i have to say that she is a murderer and killed thousands of people, it doesnt matter that they can be brought back by the Dragon Balls she still killed them.
Anyway i liked the story it was really good but like i said a few times Gohan was too goody goody talking all that shit about forgiveness and stuff, i just dont understand it personally, i just cant understand how you could forgive a guy like 17 or even 18 for killing that many people and she hardly cared, she even said that she didnt care about killing them but only that it disappointed Gohan and that it was boring, that is a really bad reasoning lol.
Ah well i can only hope that you will write a Ruthless Killer!Gohan who takes over the world with 18 as his lover and 17 as his pseudo brother! Like the Gohan from "The Ultimate Threat" he was awesome! Evil rocks lol
And mate you write the best DBZ fics you know even if i complain so much hehe!