Reviews for May I Use You?
Guest chapter 21 . 1/8
Probably the best DBZ fanfic I've ever read (there's not many, but still). I see idnt expect 17 to be good in the end, anyhow. But you still told a story worthy of airtime. Not worthy of the DBZ title, but you'd have to write some shaekspeare level shit to be able for mebto say its worth the DBZ title. Maybe it deserves the GT title, but hey. A great fanfic all around. I have to search through the crap all the time, and sometimes I wonder why I do it, then I see a story like yours and it reminds me why. Thank you.
SaintMichael95 chapter 21 . 9/13/2014
Actually im rather content with the fact that #17 died. I find it kinda doubtful that it would be convincing if he switched sides... He was just too far gone IMO
Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
I enjoy this story,thanks
Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
I really enjoy this story
Musicguy1912 chapter 21 . 6/17/2014
This was an excellent story, much better than letting 17 and 18 of the future as mercy less killing machines, ok at least 18, I like Krillin and 18,but gohan and 18, or should I say Jackie, make a very charming couple. Congratulations, good job :)
USSj1SupaJay chapter 2 . 4/18/2014
O.o 18 that witch...
You had a error, In line 10 , You mean to say 'beat' instead of 'eat'.
USSj1SupaJay chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Beautifully done.
Pizzadude5665 chapter 21 . 11/13/2013
this story was incredible
Gold Testament chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
I'm still a major fan of this story and Odd Affection.
Mega Rayquaza chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
17 is way too OOC
Nathanel chapter 21 . 7/13/2012
"Even if the people of this planet don't forgive you, we can always go to namek and use the dragonballs there to help out."

Less than 2 seconds of reading, later:

Now he was gone, and without any dragonballs, there was no way to bring him back.

WTF dude?
61394 chapter 17 . 3/8/2012
17 went over the deep end i love it
Vegito Jr 113 chapter 21 . 2/26/2012
I love the story :3 couple minor issues here and there, lot of repeating dialogue in the plot but it was really good. And the character development was great too keep it up :p
Oghma Infinium chapter 6 . 12/12/2011
Ha ha, sucks to be you Babidi!
Gohanroxme chapter 21 . 6/22/2011
Awesome story, dude! I love the plot and stuff. So captivating. Its a really nice fic. Good title, too, lol.
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