|Reviews for Daybreak|
| Tanon chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Wow. This was a good read. The only criticism I could give is that this paragraph:
'Likely, if there'd been Autobots around to incite into a vengeful rage, or if he'd been in the middle of a battle induced bloodlust, she'd be as dead as her family. Lucky for Daybreak, Megatron had been composed and only surrounded by his own soldiers. And he'd taken her back, knowing she'd make a better soldier than a corpse.'
Isn't really necessary, as it pretty much repeats stuff that already has been said or just states the obvious.
Still, a really nice oneshot.
| staringsideways chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Nicely done - and the reasoning for her survival shows a hell of a lot more character depth to Megatron than I'd expect in a short piece.