Reviews for A Flick of the Tongue
APersonWhoWonders chapter 1 . 1/30
For a first lemon, you did awesome! . I don't think I could ever write a lemon this good.
But if you wanted to know, the episode was episode 2.
Mew Cupcake chapter 1 . 1/21
I normally don't comment on lemons, but this is really well made and I love it! I'm glad I found this story!

-MC 3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14
I just died. That was awesome, amazing, touching and exquisite at the same time. Wow, just Wow. You're awesome
o chapter 1 . 1/5
Awesome, nice storytelling!
Dovahkiin101 chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
I love this! Very lemony but it still has a sweet story attached to it. - The ending made me laugh to. XD I wonder how long Aido was out there...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
Omg that was great, the only thing that I kept think about was the fact that if she's never had a kiss, is she not a virgin? If she's a virgin, won't she bleed? If she bleeds, ... Well you know.
Lady of the Fates chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Hot I approve
a fan chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
wow you did really great! expecaily for your first time. its like your a nautural. i think you would be a great writer. keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
FANTASTIC!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
the ending was cute
mackenzierosess chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
this was absolutely amazing! loved it so much!
mackenzie chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
omg this was so amazing you NEED to write more!
ImperatrixTempore chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Oh my gods this was incredible! I ship them so hard!
CRAZED D PERSON chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
nice for our first
tianna chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
I like it
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