Reviews for Betrayed
Paula Galtarocha chapter 1 . 5/16
I thought Tony was very bastard in this episode. In no time he assumed he intended to protect Tim, this theory belongs only to fanfics. Tony's fans like to pretend that this episode never happened, but it was one of the worst Tony stock, a negative witness to the character's character.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Heheheheheheheheeee!
ElSaTa chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
loved it. only just found it today
SpiritWriterXXX chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
i think timmy would make an excellent sniper
Yabbit chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
awesome story

i always like Mcgee getting one up on Tony

:P
trout1986 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
this is a great piece, Tim gets some nice from Boss but is not an ass about it like Tony does, Don't get wrong I like Tony. But he can be a jerk.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
good story,

one it was vance job to decide who goes.

TONY as tim boss and friend said DO NOT ask to go, if you really want to go.. NOWING it was the wrong thing

this is not a matter of think for yourself,

if GIBBS said tony you want to go to vages for mission, go to vacnc and tell him you speek spainsia, but for the mision they wanted you to speek greek, it make you look stipid and you would not be able to go..

sorry i just mad that people are blaming megree becouse tony lied,
USAFChief chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
It is nice for McGee to be able to do something that Tony cannot. Good thinking. Nicely done.

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Teyerin chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Nicely written and the inclusion of Gunny Barnes was perfect.
Lerrinus chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I too felt bad for McGee for being tricked out of the Iraq mission in that episode! I'm glad you wrote this, well done! :-)
ilikebuffy chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i like this story it was a why to show megree in a good light..

second tony did crew tim... HE TOLD him not to volunter, i dont belive they would have chosen him but vince little comant about not voluntering hurt megree..

yes you should think for your self, but tony telling the wrong think to do is screwing over your parter in is wrong...
alix33 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
"I know this is rather out of character but I wanted Tim to be able to show Tony up for once." - And this dyed-in-the-wool Timothy McGee fan writing up this review appreciates that you did it, even if it IS out of character.
Lillz chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
brilliant. yep, it's great seeing Tim get the upper hand. oh, but i laughed at "McSniper"!

great ficlet :)
CBW chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I like the idea behind the story but I think maybe you needed to pick a different episode. Much as I'd love to see Gibbs support Mcgee in this way I just don't get it for this one.

In relying on Tony's 'advice' Mcgee basically displayed his own lack of confidence so there is no way he could have lead a team in Iraq.

For the idea to work you need to pick an issue where Mcgee really was screwed over and could have succeeded if Tony hadn't interferred.
Randy chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I think a story like this is only fair considering there is another story that was basically inspired by how "mean" some people think Tim is to Tony.
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