Reviews for My Loved One
Collie Parkillo chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Love, I'm pretty sure this is in the wrong category. This archive is for fanfiction relating to The Long Walk by Stephen King.
I'm not going to criticize your actual story, I'm just going to say that you should probably move it to another archive.
Thunderwolf7 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Sorry, I don't mean to just jump in here, but is this the novel written by Slavomir Rawicz? It is also called "The long walk" .

But anyway, very very good work! You should keep writting.

Thunderwolf7
Amory Vain chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Uhh, either this isn't fanfiction, or it's in the wrong category.
let-darkness-come chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
its good but ima little confused who is cole and sam?

and what the hell is going on