Reviews for LUNCHEON ON THE GRASS
FoxLittleRedFox chapter 6 . 8/4
Dear Demented,
This was such a saucy little story. Severus and Lucius together is a dream come true, I believe, you feel the same way -the story definitely indicates that.
It was brilliantly written, very funny, great dialogues and sex. I couldn't ask for more.
I'm in love with your writing.
Thank you
Fox xx
FoxLittleRedFox chapter 5 . 8/4
Ok Demented, so I haven't finish reading this chapter yet, but I had to let you know I find it hilarious.
I nearly laughed out loud 3 times already and I'm not even half way through! And let me tell you, that laughing at present is not advisable...I'm a teacher, you see...and I'm in a class. I do my job of course, but I read in between tasks...and I have to hide my face, so my girls can't see me. All your fault...
Fox xx
FoxLittleRedFox chapter 1 . 8/4
Nice start, Demented :)
A Lucius...what a perv...hahahaha Only Lucius can be so twisted.
Fox xx
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
Of course Lucius would be turned on by seeing a mudblood being tortured.
brokenblackangel chapter 6 . 2/9/2012
Love your stories. And I loved your reference in chapter two to mens Vouge. And how Lucius talked of next season and it being Avant Garde, I laughed so hard D Lucy being prissy and vain is terribly amusing and you write him really well )
Miravisu chapter 6 . 8/7/2010
I love how Lucius and Severus are so very well acquainted, and their lovely banter... and how Hermione is not shy of getting part of such a threesome, er trio, too!
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen chapter 6 . 5/9/2010
That was really hot! Though you should really change the fic status to complete- I almost didn't read it thinking it was abandoned.
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
:O Mione! You naughty girl! :o
ViolentAi chapter 6 . 8/17/2009
M, sexy! The invincible threesome, haha. :P Very good story.
CoCo82 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
"Lucius had seen the girl writhe on his carpet, and once Lucius had seen a woman writhing – little did it matter whether in embarrassment, pain or ecstasy – he wanted to see her writhe again. Generally underneath him, deprived of clothing but playing temporary host to one or more of his body parts."

*Squee* Oh my! This should be VERY interesting...
twilightrockz chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
Its over? well thats sucks lol, it was very good!
dimensioner chapter 6 . 7/9/2009
Wonderful story!
dimensioner chapter 5 . 7/9/2009
So, Severus and Lucius are closing in on Hermione.

Ron's adventure was really fun to read, I like the way you portray him a lot.

Still can't imagine Lucius with short hair though...Gotta keep on reading...
dimensioner chapter 4 . 7/8/2009
I didn't even think of the possibility that they could have hopped from painting to painting...

Ron was close, and his encounter with the french police was highly amusing. Your french is excellent, by the way!
dimensioner chapter 3 . 7/8/2009
Until you mentioned that Lucius had to get them out of the picture, I thought they'd just stay in it 'til the museum closes. So when Severus and Lucius used the spell in school, they did take turns as well? It's not really obvious when Severus talks about it to Hermione.

Otherwise, amusing chapter. And Ron is not out of the picture yet (no pun intented), so things are definitely going to be interesting!
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