|Reviews for Jala's Journal|
| Kauris Azurai chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Wow, I am without words. This touches on a side that is often left untouched by the creators of bionicle. I look forward to seeing more!
| InTheLight-Hija chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Wow. This is really good. Sad we don't get to know more, 'cos of what happens though. *thumbs up* love it.
| Aderia chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Wow! I liked the setup and everything with the months and days. it showed a lot of creativity. You gave Jaller a good character. opinionated, and agreeable. I thought it was funnw with Spidey and the Hulk. I never thought of Nidhiki and Krekka like that. Its fits so well. But you said that Vakama was making a mask of time. I believe it is the Vahi, not Avokii, but maybe not. You described the characters very well. Keep writing!