Reviews for Bad Seeds
tigerlily124 chapter 9 . 8/31/2013
Good job. A well written and appropriately disturbing story.
janesbiotch chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
good lord she jumped from the window. Hey i stand four foot six and yes windows can be a bitch. I like this little girl. Is that bad? Great writing.
janesbiotch chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
ain't nothing worst than an evil child. They are both scary and cute at the same time
Kuhlama chapter 9 . 2/7/2012
OMG ! That was a super evil story ! I enjoyed it very much

PS: I was positively surprised to see the story finished because it's not marked complete !
Kuhlama chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
Wow, this is awesome !

You put so much thought into this.

You have a fantastic style of writing !

I'm super impressed :)
flame69 chapter 9 . 2/22/2011
Wow this story was great, i never would have guessed the mother would kill her. It's good how you got the reader feeling sorry for little boy like he was a victim and then the last bit just shocks you to the core, it was a very good story :)

SheWhoFliesWithDragons chapter 9 . 6/22/2010
Wow... I did NOT see that end coming. But the story was excellent :)
lotrelves chapter 9 . 12/31/2009
*speechless about the ending*
Kansas42 chapter 9 . 8/29/2009
I just got into The Mentalist, so I've been pouring over fanfiction, trying to find something that's a little more than Jane is tragic, Lisbon helps, or Lisbon cries, Jane holds her, blah blah. I was really surprised (and happy) to find this story, which I thought was funny, interesting, and had a solid grip on what the characters were actually like. Plus, The Bad Seed! I haven't seen that movie (the original) since I was a kid. I hope you write more Mentalist fanfic, because I really enjoyed this one a lot.
Amakurikara chapter 9 . 6/5/2009
Wow. Wow. WOW. This story was amazingly disturbing. And that ending-oh my gosh! Wow. This has been probably the best story I have ever read. You are an amazing writer. And this story-wow. I don't know what else to say. The ending...oh man! Oh man! I can't say anything else. I'm speechless. Or review-less...but anyways! A fantastic story. I was not expecting such an ending like this. And I had a feeling that the girl was guilty...but then having her mom kill her! Unexpected, but good. Real good. And like you said, probably for the best. But the little boy-what's going to happen to him? I absolutely LOVED this story. Great job!
ShakNali chapter 9 . 6/4/2009
Well, this gave me chills all the way through. You did a good job of it.
Belladonna Kyle chapter 9 . 5/22/2009
That's kind of terrifying. Good job.
x.imagine.x chapter 9 . 5/21/2009

that little boy is just like her.


that ending sent shivers down my spine.

So my guess is that he'll become a serial killer.

that story was just...


x.imagine.x chapter 8 . 5/21/2009
Oh no way! Seriously, this story is so amazing.

I went down to take a shower, and all i could think about was sociopaths and creepy little girls. it was scary!
x.imagine.x chapter 7 . 5/21/2009
that's disturbing. You write Jeannie so well, it's like she's an actual person.
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