Reviews for Better
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
that's beautiful I wished it just had a happier ending
PokeFanGirl chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Blackwater _ I've only read two blackwater stories huh and there pretty great too. I loved this even though it's short I like it great job.
Sun In The Sky chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I can see Leah not wanting to admit it at first, not when Jacob was still there...so it works.

Erm, as much as I despise the term, this is pretty perfect :D
wrakazama chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
AWESOME :D One of my faves, I love how the finishíng line shows her true emotions, also I think that you've captured the emotions pretty well. :d
angstyklainer chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Poor jacob...and Leah, I guess...:*(
some1 who likes to read chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
This was very cute. I really liked the end and actually said "AW". Keep up the good work.
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Jake should've tripped or something... so he could hear her. XD

love.

-toffeecakesxox.
silverbird88 chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Very interesting study of conflicting emotions.
werewolf-in-training chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
why did Leah think that Jacob was Sam?
X5 - 452 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Bloody oath! Jake is 10 billion times better than sam! yew!

Loved it!
Peregrinate chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Well, humph. Can't seem to find anything to criticize. .

Brilliantly done. Flawless. Beautiful parallel through the story with the tittle.

Loved it.

101/100

Critic
Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Aw, that was sad, but good.
nikkiRA chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
very nice :D

How do you put a giraffe into the fridge?

Open the fridge, put it in, and close the door.
Name On The Spine chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
oh, thats sad. oh is a good um response I suppose to this, but poor Leah and poor Jacob and all around sadness.
BeautifulPieces chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
aww how sweet..

“You’re better love that line