|Reviews for Partners|
| BookWorm4479 chapter 1 . 5/15
Just finished and came back to review. Nice! I admire how you embraced the strengths AND the weaknesses of each character but had them manifested in different ways than the original story. Admirable!
| FiZzGig520 chapter 66 . 3/3/2016
OMG I have been reading this story for about a week now and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I honestly wish I could truly express exactly how much and to think that I came across this wonderful piece of fan fiction in someone's comment on the kinkmeme!
| rc48177 chapter 14 . 1/8/2016
Your doing a damn good job portraying these complex characters. good work
| wrewrw chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
| AraelDranoth chapter 4 . 7/16/2015
Still a fantastic read.
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/25/2015
Hahaha... I don't know why I found that line so funny. I guess my mind is just a dirty place
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
Aw, this is just adorable! It's nice to Rorschach with a sense of humor
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 7 . 5/4/2015
Ooooh His Voice Was Ringing Some Bells :)
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 5 . 5/4/2015
Loved them meeting with the Comedian :)
| ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Great Start :)
| StrangePointOfView chapter 66 . 1/28/2015
This is amazing and adorable!
I'm glad you set this before Rorschach had his incident with the dogs. Otherwise I would have had to avoid it because of how ooc he's being. But it's not ooc for this period of his life, and I love how you've made it feel lighter without detracting from the grimness of the Watchmen world.
| lemonsimeanfluff chapter 66 . 7/16/2014
Ah, the happier alternate version of Watchmen. :') I'm crying because this is the best watchmen fanfic I've ever read. I...I actually have no idea what to say, there's so much to love in this fanfic.
First off, I want to say thank you! Thank you so much for making this fanfic! I've enjoyed every bit of this, how you wrote the ups and downs and difficulties of having a relationship with someone like Rorschach is pretty realistic with what Laurie went through. Although there were some parts of OOC-ness it did match and go well with the story.
My favorite parts were Walter being jealous. ;D Well, maybe except when he almost killed Dan. Maybe. (I never liked him in the novel, LOL.)
Every fluff moment with Laurie and Walter made me ASDFGH:JKL. I swear, I squealed/screamed everytime they said corny stuff/and or kissed.
Inever thought of Rorschach/Walter and Laurie together- I was a bit skeptical when I heard of the pairing, but now I am totally crazy for this pairing. They will forever be my OTP. Once again, thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfic! Thank you! :))
| Guest chapter 34 . 10/20/2013
lol. he fell asleep while leaning down over her for a kiss?
| Rex Splode chapter 21 . 10/19/2013
I never read the comics.. but I just cant seeing Rorchach crying... Like no, seriously, never. lol. I don't even recall if he did in the movie, but I don't think he did. I know this is a few chapters late, but It stuck out as being completely out of character... although quite a bit is out of character from the standard. This is not a bad thing, AU is good sometimes. This story.. has ups and downs,.
Sometimes your writing impresses me, then at other times i feel like your just filling space or not sure how to make someone come acrossed. Your pretty good with the Monologue for Rorchach, with his constant inner demons,mental problems, and just how life has made him kinda F'ed up because he doesn't wanna be like everyone else. As far as FF goes, this is good.
| Rex Splode chapter 9 . 10/19/2013
How old is Walter in this story? He cant be much older than 27, if the comedian is calling him a kid and shes only 16.