Reviews for The Unforgiving
Uisig chapter 1 . 10/10
So, I have a question. *gets on one knee and holds out a laptop* Will you make this into a full length story for me. You would make me the happiest man alive.
Marvelous chapter 1 . 9/10
Wow, that a bit dark. Short simple easy, yeah in the end though...
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 8/25
Pretty dark, yeah. But understandable. You don't break someone's dreams and betray them, and then expect them to be the same person afterwards.
And.I am here chapter 1 . 8/5
What a piece of ART!, even if i use this ''Guess'' Review, 'cuz i am to lazy to Log in, but netherless to say, that this fic, is just AWESOME!, no awesome or ~awesome~ but AWESOME!, the last Room was just... EPIC!, i didn't saw that coming, literally when i finished this, i clapped my hands like an idiot and my mom slapped on my head, but the pain was a worth prize.

But the part that i really gasped, was the Hidden Room where was those Weapons and reminders of Akatsuki, Kakashi and some others, even if this is not a Full History, is a worth waste of time...

Just less than 6k words and i was literally with a booner...
Vivaan chapter 1 . 8/2
Simply brilliant!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
Now this is the kind of story I like. A Naruto who settles down as a peaceful farmer, leading a simple life and not caring about Konoha unless provoked. Then he turns into a one-man S-rank army capable of bringing villages to their knees WITHOUT the kyuubi's aid. The best part of this is that it's not a dark, evil naruto or an idiotic, naive naruto, but a naruto who holds no grudges or hatred, who chooses to ignore Konoha unless they declare themselves a threat, at which he retaliates with extreme prejudice. Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
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thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/15
its always cool to see stories where the hero moves on with their life
pikachucat chapter 1 . 6/11
awesome
Silence42 chapter 1 . 6/6
Wow, just wow *favorites* you earned this
Anonymous Person chapter 1 . 5/23
That has got to be the darkest Naruto fic I've read.
It's also kinda creepy how nothing more than weapon or certain clothing descriptions were needed to figure out exactly who had owned each item previously.
Btw, you should know my first reaction after finishing this was "Holy fuck"
Rebmul chapter 1 . 4/20
interesting story don't know why I was in the we love ladies community there was no ladies in this
Ameranthian chapter 1 . 3/23
Ohh, a grim take on Naruto. I like it.
segment thought chapter 1 . 3/14
vengeful!naruto is a badass

enjoyed reading!
Violete Death chapter 1 . 2/26
I usually don't like short ones, but I loved this one.
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