| Reviews for The Unforgiving |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2023 Know that is how it's done well done man finally a story we're naruto doesn't forgive are go's back he gets revenge Everyone thinks he's dead so he gets to live in peace now and revenge on the leaf yes |
 3tim chapter 1 . 6/22/2023 The amazing thing about this is how someone could have easily stretched this out to 300k words. I really liked it as a oneshots. |
| Abi chapter 1 . 6/16/2023 I actually looking forward,for Naruto to punch Sakura a shame. |
| Neroscurse chapter 1 . 5/24/2023 Nicely done mate. |
| ja3419 chapter 1 . 4/27/2023 Naruto became the ultimate Ninja, no one knew of his skill or prowess. |
| Marnie Ascart chapter 1 . 4/25/2023 Dang, what a great take on that overused trope! Your Naruto was cool and the twist amazing! Your clipped, sober writing style suited the story’s tone perfectly. |
| SuckMyBalls chapter 1 . 4/18/2023 This is how your other story should have happened. Do you see how unnecessary your idiotic drama is when it's not there? It's stupid and ruins the story. |
| KINGCHOWKING chapter 1 . 3/22/2023 Meh. Boring |
| Shank chapter 1 . 1/12/2023 Damn now that is one tough tale about Naruto Uzumaki. Nice done |
| KINGShaheed chapter 1 . 12/23/2022 Now THAT is a ninja! Awesome work. |
| Tetradical chapter 1 . 9/29/2022 Awesome! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2022 Damn |
| Kokusen chapter 1 . 7/11/2022 i can just say only one word "wow". for one shot this is just amazing and fantastic |
| Hyperman15 chapter 1 . 4/14/2022 Very nice change of pace Reading this feels like watching an alternate ending from a game. This would be the neutral ending I guess. |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 3/13/2022 Well damn that was pretty cool and dark. |