|Reviews for The Unforgiving|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
Know that is how it's done well done man finally a story we're naruto doesn't forgive are go's back he gets revenge Everyone thinks he's dead so he gets to live in peace now and revenge on the leaf yes
| 3tim chapter 1 . 6/22
The amazing thing about this is how someone could have easily stretched this out to 300k words. I really liked it as a oneshots.
| Abi chapter 1 . 6/16
I actually looking forward,for Naruto to punch Sakura a shame.
| Neroscurse chapter 1 . 5/24
Nicely done mate.
| ja3419 chapter 1 . 4/27
Naruto became the ultimate Ninja, no one knew of his skill or prowess.
| Marnie Ascart chapter 1 . 4/25
Dang, what a great take on that overused trope! Your Naruto was cool and the twist amazing! Your clipped, sober writing style suited the story’s tone perfectly.
| SuckMyBalls chapter 1 . 4/18
This is how your other story should have happened. Do you see how unnecessary your idiotic drama is when it's not there? It's stupid and ruins the story.
| KINGCHOWKING chapter 1 . 3/22
| Shank chapter 1 . 1/12
Damn now that is one tough tale about Naruto Uzumaki. Nice done
| KINGShaheed chapter 1 . 12/23/2022
Now THAT is a ninja! Awesome work.
| Tetradical chapter 1 . 9/29/2022
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2022
| Kokusen chapter 1 . 7/11/2022
i can just say only one word "wow". for one shot this is just amazing and fantastic
| Hyperman15 chapter 1 . 4/14/2022
Very nice change of pace
Reading this feels like watching an alternate ending from a game. This would be the neutral ending I guess.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 3/13/2022
Well damn that was pretty cool and dark.