Reviews for The Unforgiving
bigfan22 chapter 1 . 6/13
Hahahahaha...while I loved that Konoha finally had to answer for all their mistakes, it's too bad the people who caused Naruto didn't get to know the truth about his skills before their deaths. As always...this was a wonderful read and thanks for writing this one-shot for the rest of us.
John Waters Favorite Gimp chapter 1 . 5/19
Pretty dope.
Field Marshal Marshmallow chapter 1 . 5/9
Every time I read this I am hit with it all over again
hentai18ancilla chapter 1 . 5/9
Nice
littleditto chapter 1 . 4/19
This is amazing. I love your take on this trope
magicanimegurl chapter 1 . 4/1
This is to be expected. Good job. Naruto was abused by the village... they got what they deserved. Plus he left kids alone. Write on!
Plot Bull chapter 1 . 3/20
Interesting. Came here from Spacebattles looking for antagonist centric stories, but this falls flat as far as the characterization of a malicious Naruto goes.

Well written. Like a museum piece dedicated to awful Naruto tropes primarily utilized by middle schooler's, but well written. Enjoyable even.

Ultimately, a Naruto (or Harry,) that gives into the pressure to be evil tells a story of weakness, not strength, no matter how meny normals get killed. But regardless of what I think of it, it's a good little story.
RyuThePrimordial chapter 1 . 2/6
pєrfєct
Indra Sparrow chapter 1 . 1/31
A beautiful story, one that I think I will remember for quite some time.
Tychon chapter 1 . 1/26
Deep.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
This is how it's supposed to be done.
Carnival14 chapter 1 . 12/31/2017
Well this just blew my mind.
jtscores chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
I have read many, many stories. This is my favorite.
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
RebeccaRoy chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Wow, what vengeance was his, and well deserved if a bit chilling.
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