Reviews for The Unforgiving
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
Know that is how it's done well done man finally a story we're naruto doesn't forgive are go's back he gets revenge Everyone thinks he's dead so he gets to live in peace now and revenge on the leaf yes
3tim chapter 1 . 6/22
The amazing thing about this is how someone could have easily stretched this out to 300k words. I really liked it as a oneshots.
Abi chapter 1 . 6/16
I actually looking forward,for Naruto to punch Sakura a shame.
Neroscurse chapter 1 . 5/24
Nicely done mate.
ja3419 chapter 1 . 4/27
Naruto became the ultimate Ninja, no one knew of his skill or prowess.
Marnie Ascart chapter 1 . 4/25
Dang, what a great take on that overused trope! Your Naruto was cool and the twist amazing! Your clipped, sober writing style suited the story’s tone perfectly.
SuckMyBalls chapter 1 . 4/18
This is how your other story should have happened. Do you see how unnecessary your idiotic drama is when it's not there? It's stupid and ruins the story.
KINGCHOWKING chapter 1 . 3/22
Meh. Boring
Shank chapter 1 . 1/12
Damn now that is one tough tale about Naruto Uzumaki. Nice done
KINGShaheed chapter 1 . 12/23/2022
Now THAT is a ninja! Awesome work.
Tetradical chapter 1 . 9/29/2022
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2022
Kokusen chapter 1 . 7/11/2022
i can just say only one word "wow". for one shot this is just amazing and fantastic
Hyperman15 chapter 1 . 4/14/2022
Very nice change of pace

Reading this feels like watching an alternate ending from a game. This would be the neutral ending I guess.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 3/13/2022
Well damn that was pretty cool and dark.
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