Don't know if you even read these reviews any more but I loved this story. I've read several fanfics but there are few that I take the time to review. You should try to publish this one. Looking forward to reading more of your work.~ Tish

It's DOZE off, not DOSE.

. This was a very well written book you are very talented I was so intrigued
and engaged into this book. I haven’t read a book all the way through in about 3/4 years I know it’s a fanfic but it’s was still a great read and I really enjoyed for writing it️️

Absolutely loooooved this story. The story line was perfect. I’m even okay with Rosalie’s disappearance.

Beautiful story! I loved it so much.

This story was not what I was expecting in an incredible way. Looooooved this!

This epilogue was great, the whole story was, I liked that Edward never deceived Bella despite the time of separation, he always respected her.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQuez

Always worth a good reread :)

Still love this story, even after the 3rd time :)

I take it they got married before the twins were born? I love that they had twins and especially love Edison as it means son of Edward, who knew, brillant name. Beau was sweet too.
thank you for keeping this story here for readers like myself to find and enjoy. As I said I don't usually like high school stories but this one kept my interest, frustrated me with the teen drama and had me cheering Edward as he struggled with his literacy issues.
I've left you my thanks as comments and thoughts after each chapter.

Right to the end Edward was not going to be typical...I did feel badly for Bella, thinking she was pregnant and after all this time not sure that Edward would want this in their life and that she worried about now wanting to get married. Edward's attitude, although first shared by Bella, that marriage wasn't needed in their case was on one hand ok but on another pretty insulting. I guess having a baby forces that issue and his having Bella snake her hand in a tube for her ring was an interesting way to propose.

Very sweet ending. I didn't figure Bella would go into accounting as she said she hated math. I suppose it will come in handy if and when Edward starts up his own business she can do the books.

So that was it with Bella, just "normal" bleeding from the first time sex? I suppose that must happen in rare instances and that's all the doctor told Bella? I mean I would think she'd give her tips on how to make sex easier with lube etc. And when Bella and Edward had sex in the car, did they have full blown sex or was Edward's four fingers it for her? It went to black and here I am wondering if her second time was "all better" after bleeding for two days and all her pain...
Anyway, loved the license plate and Carlisle sitting on the stoop watching the teens interact in a "normal" way signally that Edward is now enjoying normal coming of age in a happy way.

So much going on here with the Cullens, Edward and Bella that I could go on and on. Enough to say that things get more complicated with each passing day for these characters. Edward's now worried Bella is thinking of leaving him behind and going to college. Well, yeah. Is she supposed to be held back because Edward lacks confidence to think of more education after high school. This is why parents don't want their teens to have sex too early and attach themselves to someone they fall for in high school...oh what drama.

Well so much for a sweet and or sexy first time for Bella. She's in so much pain she tells him to take "it" out and then when they finally do the deed, she's all sorts of hurting and if I'm not mistaken she's describing a UTI. And the icing on the cake, Carlisle comes home and finds them sleeping together while his sister is laying very sick in the hospital.