Reviews for Ashes
yukino89 chapter 11 . 12/26/2018
Pleas more
happysue115 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
I love you. And this chapter. And I think I'm going to like this story.
KyuuKitsunex3 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
...Wow what kind of parent would not only allow their child to work at a strip club, but let said child meet up with a man he had seduced at a strip club. o.o

He's still awesome though.
Yumeina-sama chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
Really not my cup of tea... LoL.. I concluded that Naruto is a complete wh*re!... It's either he loves s*x so much, or the money he gets is not enough that's why he's working as a prostitute(his parents and grandfather actually allowed him to do that...SO DISGUSTING)... Really i don't get the plot anymore... Could you enlighten me as to why he is working as a prostitute?... Is he far from sane? Or he has lots of debts to pay? LoL. P.S my best guess is because he's got some serious mental ISSUES ! LoL... Hmm... Is it really normal nowadays to have s*x with anyone without the feeling of love... Hmmmm... I think it's sweeter and more memorable if you'll give your virginity to the guy you love.. Oh well, this is your story so i'll just f*ck off! LOL
Yumeina-sama chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Not that i don't like this story but i'm wondering if minato is a bad father, coz honestly, no good father will allow their child to work in a stripbar... It seems that they're not in need of money, so why would he allow it... So does naruto had s*x with some of his customers because of money?
andysanime chapter 11 . 3/24/2013
Really good job on this story.
YinKeket chapter 9 . 8/18/2012
yay Sasuke did it by asking him to marry him and the blonde said yes. well at least Naruto knows Sasuke is a demon and he knows Naruto is a half demon. awwwwwww Naruto wanted to send his mother and father on trip. i would laugh when Naruto's sees Sasuke and same with Sasuke's father when he sees Naruto. lol Sasuke is sacred meeting Naruto's parents. well so far things has gone well until Naruto said oh no when his mother came in lol. oh crap poor Naruto and Sasuke being in the room. yay Sasuke can be in Naruto's room and said he might have his child. oh Naruto's parents would have a field day with that lol.
YinKeket chapter 7 . 8/18/2012
yay good thing Sasuke called Naruto again. well Sasuke is talking to his father about Naruto who is a half demon which is good. i bet the father would be shock on who Naruto looks like. yay playing video games that blow their heads up. must have been playing some type of zombie game. lol Sasuke called being a jerk face and hung up then called again. yay they are going on a date. uh two months ago, nod betting what Sasuke would make the blondes last and him only. well now they are having some fun time. lol at your author note.
YinKeket chapter 4 . 8/18/2012
uh i didn't add this last time but what Sakura was a male. shake head on Sakura wanted Sasuke which clearing the raven wanted Naruto. yay on m-preg it was a win. on to reading more of this. awesome he has the number he needed plus his father wanted the number so his son can can be normal and have some to care for him. awwwwwwwww Sasuke wanted to hear the blondes' voice. how sweet. well his mom and dad knew but his dad is uneasy which was not good. even in Sailor Moon had Pluto as a planet and i grew up with Pluto being a planet. yay Sasuke was learning that Naruto wanted to get to know him more.
YinKeket chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
love the name of the place and even loving how trying to get the demon out of you. go Naruto being all sexy. well done on having the details on the clothes. i can see them really wearing that. lol on Naruto licks Sasuke's face then move back on stage. that is a fun rule ("look, but don't touch" rule.) lol Naruto's usual groupies Sai and Neji. awesome Kiba and Gaara are in doing something like Naruto is doing. lol Naruto is getting lost in his own daydreams poor Gaara. oh man the blondes' dad doesn't like what his son was doing. oh Naruto is a half demon sweet. lol both blondes are afraid of his mother and his wife which is funny. well done with this. can't wait to read more of this.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/3/2012
first: great writing
second:get some psychological help
third: "just keep swimming..."

eracaled
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
i really hope u keep writing its suprisingly good

eracaled
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
really good im hooked already

eracaled
xXFluffyKitsuneXx chapter 2 . 4/20/2012
Love the story plot XD and the whole making sakura a girl! lol made my day
Ookami-Ryuu chapter 11 . 11/29/2011
Quite interesting story. *smile*

/Dragonwolf
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